Talk:Andrew II of Hungary/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 14:50, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * One DAB link
 * I don't think there needs to be red links throughout the article if there is no article for it.
 * The two or thee line paragraphs could be consolidated into previous paragraph or into one paragraph. For instance, in "New institutions" and campaigns in Halych (1205–1217), the paragraph beginning "Andrew and Leszek of Poland" and the following beginning "A new officer of state," could be just one paragraph together.
 * Same for the first two paragraphs of Golden Bull (1218–1222). It just looks more concise.

Thanks for your patience. To be honest, that's all I can fault! If one could even call them faults. This article is well written. I think you should take this forward for FA (obviously do peer review first). But for a GA, I can't find anything else that needs work. On hold for 7 days. I have over 2,300 articles on my watch list so ping me when you need me. — ₳aron  13:51, 14 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Outcome
 * , thank you for your review. Upon your suggestion, I changed the red links and consolidated the short paragraphs. However, I have not found the DAB link. Please let me know if further action is needed. Borsoka (talk) 04:59, 16 March 2015 (UTC)
 * It may have been one of the red links. Great, well done :) —  ₳aron  09:11, 16 March 2015 (UTC)