Talk:Andrew McDermot

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Lead paragraph needs to be reworked so it is clear why he is notable. Have to read for a long time to figure it out. Fawcett5 19:55, 17 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I'll try to work on it sometime this week or next weekend. I don't think I've looked at that article since I created it a while ago. Thanks for the suggestion. CWood 01:18, 18 Apr 2005 (UTC)


 * Oh, hi Christie, I didn't even realise it was your article - should have figured though given the subject area. Fawcett5 02:04, 18 Apr 2005 (UTC)