Talk:Andriantsimitoviaminiandriana Andriandrazaka/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Dr. Blofeld (talk · contribs) 20:12, 13 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * He became an independent king upon his father's death . Date?
 * Added.


 * "the easternmost and largest piece. " Piece seems strange to describe land, territory?
 * Changed to territory.

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance:
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:

I'll assume good faith that you'll respond to the two very minor points. For Madagascar in the 1700s it seems a very decent entry.♦ Dr. Blofeld  17:22, 19 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the quick review and your comments. I've made the changes you've requested. Cheers, Lemurbaby (talk) 21:11, 20 August 2013 (UTC)