Talk:Angband (band)

Angband
As far as making a page is concerned, yer gonna need a bit more. I can help you with the grammar and everything, but if you can send me a bunch of the links for info, I can help you make the page...Arch stanton1138 (talk) 20:21, 23 September 2008 (UTC)
 * I have made a few edits on the page, it now adheres a little closer to Wikipedia's guidelines. The article is still going to need more to pass, but it is a start...Arch stanton1138 (talk) 21:16, 25 September 2008 (UTC)

I would guess that the name refers to the fortress in The Silmarillion, can anyone confirm that? Micdi2 (talk) 15:19, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

Recreating Angband Page
Sorry for taking so long to reply I haven't been real active on Wikipedia lately.

I would lead with the statement that "Many sources claim that they are the first Metal band from Iran to sign a deal with a European record company" Rather than reserving it for the next section. This seems to be the bands strongest claim to notability. Notability seems to be the greatest challenge that must be met in a band biography.

I would also see if any of the members have been involved in other projects, especially if the members had other record deals later. This would also help with notability. Finally, you need to improve the way you cite sources. I noticed the first biographical paragraph had no citations. All claims must cite a source. Some of the sources you use later may contain the information you need. You may use the same reference more than once. You also need to use a template or give references in a manner that includes title, author, date and publisher. Not just a link. You can look at other articles in edit view to see how this may be done.--Kzooman (talk) 19:35, 5 December 2008 (UTC)