Talk:Angela Lansbury/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ssven2 (talk · contribs) 16:47, 18 January 2016 (UTC)

I will review this article. Thank you. — Ssven2  Speak 2 me 16:47, 18 January 2016 (UTC)

Comments

 * "Her paternal grandfather was the Labour Party leader and anti-war activist George Lansbury, a man she felt "awed" by, considering him "a giant in my youth"" — Can be rephrased as " Her paternal grandfather was the Labour Party leader and anti-war activist George Lansbury, a man whom she felt "awed" by and considered "a giant in my youth".
 * Good suggestion. Changed. Midnightblueowl (talk) 20:30, 23 January 2016 (UTC)