Talk:Angeli Foods/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 08:10, 15 January 2023 (UTC)

This is a quickfail. The prose quality needs improvement (it's mushy), and it doesn't feel tight or broad. If a page gives me Doug Coldwell vibes, I won't hesitate to return it to sender.

I want to make a few observations that are more specific:


 * This article would benefit from an infobox instead of/partly incorporating three images stuffed in the top right.
 * Consider if the topics of your redlinks are actually notable.
 * Clip your NewspaperArchive articles (which represent more than 25 percent of the sources, so that's important!). It might be a bit tedious. (Best way: keep a tab opened to as you clip and copy links as needed.) But this way people without subscriptions can view the content. If this were a better article, I'd hold the page on this alone.
 * I understand that the archives generally don't have the newspapers you need (unless you can get, say, NewsBank Access World News for recent-years Marquette and Milwaukee).

I was surprised to see a page nominated in this condition from a user with 28 FAs.