Talk:Angie Bolen/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ruby2010 (talk · contribs) 05:46, 28 May 2012 (UTC)

I think this one has waited long enough. Will review it soon.  Ruby  2010/  2013  05:46, 28 May 2012 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

Comments

 * It would be easier to just provide the necessary wikilink for ABC rather than adding the parenthesis
 * Angie is a "loving but tough Italian woman." -> Angie has been described by Cherry as a "loving but tough Italian woman."
 * When Julie rejects him once more, Danny attempts suicide by swallowing a large amount of pills -> When Julie rejects Danny once more, he attempts suicide by swallowing a large amount of pills
 * The reception section could be improved by adding [[File:Drea de Matteo 2.jpg]] and splitting the paragraph in two.
 * A well-written article. I will be happy to pass it after the above comments are addressed. Thanks,  Ruby  2010/  2013  04:29, 29 May 2012 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Passing for GA. Keep up the good work.  Ruby  2010/  2013  01:32, 1 June 2012 (UTC)