Talk:Animal Crossing: Pocket Camp

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 2 September 2021 and 10 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Peach Sunscreen. Peer reviewers: JedBarlet.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:18, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Notability
Don't think this will be an issue, but if you think this doesn't belong in mainspace even after the announcement, discuss here and (at worst) I'll move to my userspace. czar 20:45, 24 October 2017 (UTC)

Excess in lede
, "developed and published by Nintendo" is unnecessary in the lede. Describing the game as "Nintendo's" or "by Nintendo" should sufficiently explain the game's origins. Secondarily, "developed and published" is jargon to a general audience—the question is who made the game, and it wasn't ambiguous as written, especially with aid of the adjacent infobox. And the format is used in other articles (e.g., Sabre Wulf, a FA)—"developed and published by" is unthinkingly added to other articles by habit but is often not the best way to convey the article's vital details succinctly. If Nintendo's role as both developer and publisher needs to be explicit, that can be conveyed later in the lede, though I would consider it superfluous there as well. czar 08:06, 26 October 2017 (UTC)
 * Don't really agree. How is stating who developed it more confusing to a general audience than just stating "Nintendo's series", which could imply they only oversaw the production of the game? I think changing something we've used as status quo for years needs at least local consensus for it, rather than a single person's overriding opinion. ~ Dissident93  ( talk ) 18:32, 26 October 2017 (UTC)