Talk:Ankita Bhakat/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:50, 4 March 2019 (UTC)

Shall review this article. MWright96 (talk) 18:50, 4 March 2019 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Early life

 * Delink sport because it is a common term per WP:OVERLINKING
 * "she was selected to join the Tata Archery Academy (TAA) " - the acroynms aren't needed since they are not mentioned anywhere else in the article

Career

 * "However, a week before the event, the Indian team withdrew from the event" - remove the text in bold since it's unncessary
 * "which was held from 3 to 9 September 2015 at Seoul, South Korea" - from 3 to 9 September in Seoul, South Korea
 * "a bronze in the girl's individual recurve event and a silver in the girl's recurve team event." - change the text in bold to competition to avoid close reptition of event
 * "She won the bronze medal in the mixed team event with partner Mukesh Boro." - with her partner
 * "respectively, on their way to the final." - en route
 * "Later in the same year," - Later that year,
 * "she was among the 24 members who were selected for the Indian national team to compete" - who were selected to compete for the Indian national team
 * "with partner Jemson Singh Ningthoujam, and together they were seeded ninth." - with her partner
 * "In April 2018, Bhakat competed at the 2018 Archery World Cup held from 23 to 29 April 2018" - the second mention of 2018 in this section of text is redundant
 * "after having scored 665 out of 720 in the qualifications round." - out of 720 points
 * Delink Argentina and China as they are major geographical regions
 * "quarter-final and the Ukrainian team 6–0 in the semi final," - "semi final" is missing a hyphen
 * "reaching the quarter-finals in both the events" - of both events
 * "In the latter event, she teamed up with Promila Daimary and Deepika Kumari," - competed for variety
 * "and eventually reached the semifinals by defeating" - semi-finals
 * "by defeating the French and the Russian team 5–3 and 5–1 in the second round and quarter-final respectively." - teams and quarter-finals, respectively.
 * "they faced Chinese Taipei in the bronze medal match, but lost 2–6." - losing 2–6.