Talk:Annette March-Grier

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2020 and 23 May 2020. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Laurajackson28, Shreyaprao.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:22, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

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-The headers are well thought out and seem to be a good way to break up the information -Maybe in the section Annette March-Grier include some more information about her upbringing. Who her parents are, where she grew up, where she went to high school etc if you can find anything. You could also include what kinds of activities she did or what she was passionate about. Citations -make sure to cite all the important places/people in your descriptions. These seem to be missing -you and shreya should combine your sandboxes into one. You both have lots of good information and the overall project would be stronger if you did so References -formatting on this section seems a little odd. I am not exactly sure what happened but maybe if you tried redoing the citations it would format correctly or ask for some help from the expert, the professor, or a peer.

Peer review: The article is well-organized, informative, and uses reliable sources. The lead is clear and concise, but the first section could use some more detail and should specify what Roberta's House Inc. is in order to illustrate why March-Grier is notable. The tone and content of the article is neutral. In the second and third sections, "Annette March-Grier" or "Annette" should be replaced with "March-Grier". I would also change the name of the third section, as "Legal Career" doesn't really capture what the section is talking about.Miayoung01 (talk) 22:44, 13 April 2020 (UTC) Mia Young

-Your beginning description is a nice overview of the topic -make sure to include citations of all important places/ideas such as mortician so people know what exactly that is, Baltimore, MD, Roberta's House, etc. Link their existing wikipedia pages to these words -definitely communicate with your partner to combine your sandboxes together. This will strengthen your overall project and add more information to whole piece