Talk:Annie Heloise Abel

Assessment comment
Substituted at 07:56, 29 April 2016 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi I have some feedback for you regarding this article:
 * I don't think information about her marriage/husband/dissolution belongs in the section "Professional achievements". Instead, you could create a "Personal life" section where content like this is listed
 * Links seem a little scarce, particularly in the "Early life and education" section where there is currently only one. What topics might the reader want to learn more about? I like to have at least one link per paragraph (and sometimes many more than that)
 * Wikipedia Manual of Style policies say that we shouldn't use the term "Dr." to refer to people, even if they are a PhD or MD (MOS:DOCTOR). So instead of "Dr. Edward Gaylord Bourne", you can just have "Edward Gaylord Bourne".
 * I would probably remove this sentence "The collection is open for research use" as it sounds like advice or a notice.
 * Great job of citing everything!

Let me know if you have questions! Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 20:58, 9 August 2019 (UTC)

Thanks, Elysia. I worked on this a bit today and changed most of things you suggested. I also added more links. I haven't yet found a picture thatI can use for her, but I'll keep looking. There are a bunch, but mostly in university archives. Afh1858 (talk) 16:31, 11 August 2019 (UTC)