Talk:Anomochilus weberi/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Etriusus (talk · contribs) 02:23, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

Grabbing this review, will have notes out soon. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 02:23, 21 August 2023 (UTC)

Images

 * Only one image. rights are in order.
 * Needs an image caption
 * Added.
 * Consider adding ALT text.
 * Done.

Sourcing

 * Nothing of note.

Copy-vios

 * Earwig gives the all clear
 * Nothing on spot checks.

Prose

 * 'dwarf pipesnake family Anomochilidae.' awkward phrasing
 * Standard formatting across most taxon articles I've written, don't really know a better way to write it.
 * "In 1890, the Dutch herpetologist..." Sentence is difficult to follow
 * Split it up.
 * "authorities merge the latter family into the former" be more specific, tighten up sentence as a whole
 * Added names of families, not sure how to tighten the sentence up.
 * "When preserved in alcohol, the species' color changes to mainly brown" Sentence is out of sequence with the rest of the paragraph
 * Rearranged para.
 * 'Greater Sunda Islands' specify that this is part of Malaysia, Brunei, and Indonesia
 * Added Indonesian Archipelago, which makes more sense biogeographically and should still be identifiable for a lay audience.

Comment: Okay, this is really close to GA criteria already, apologies if I'm being a bit nit-picky with this. It's short as well, so the review is going to be equally short. I made a few minor edits, please review when you can. On hold. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 19:13, 22 August 2023 (UTC)


 * @AryKun, giving you a customary ping. 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 19:18, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
 * , have addressed all of your comments. Thanks for the review! AryKun (talk) 12:13, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 17:13, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
 * 🏵️ Etrius ( Us) 17:13, 25 August 2023 (UTC)