Talk:Anthony Edwards (basketball)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:39, 6 April 2020 (UTC)

Taking this review as well as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 16:39, 6 April 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * "where he was rated a consensus five-star recruit and one of the best players in the 2019 class." - please clarify in this sentence who rated Edwards a five-star recruit
 * "The most heralded player to commit to Georgia in program history," - please clarify in the lead that he committed to playing college basketball for Georgia

Early life

 * "after watching his brothers play." - you can write either play the game. or play the sport. to expand this sentence
 * "He often played basketball against his brothers at their grandmother's house in the summer." - don't use phrasing such as "in the summer" per MOS:SEASON
 * Wikilink college basketball

High school career

 * You don't need the acroynms of Amateur Athletic Union since they are not mentioned elsewhere
 * "Edwards was considered a four-star recruit" - considered by whom exactly?
 * "after the summer of 2016." - another MOS:SEASON violation here
 * "since Holy Spirit Prep had "small class sizes and support to help that." - can be changed to either Holy Spirit Prepratory or {{xt|his new high school}
 * "Edwards helped Holy Spirit Prep defeat The Heritage School for the Georgia Independent School Association (GISA) Class AAA state championship." - Prepratory
 * Wikilink the first mention of the terms points, rebounds and assists to their respective articles
 * "He played in the McDonald's All-American Game and Jordan Brand Classic in the spring of 2019." - a third violation of MOS:SEASON

Recruiting

 * "By consensus, Edwards was rated a five-star recruit, top-five player, and the top shooting guard in the 2019 class." - please state exactly at the start of this sentence who formed the consensus of Edwards' ability
 * "On February 11, 2019, he committed to play for Georgia," - committed to play college basketball for the reasons of clarification
 * "Edwards was drawn to Georgia because two of his favorite players, Dwyane Wade and Victor Oladipo, had been coached in college by Georgia head coach Tom Crean." - repetition of the word "Georgia"

College career

 * To make it more comfortable to read, the entire first paragraph might be better off divided into two, preferably after the sentence about Edwards' final game of the 2019 Maui Invitiational
 * Wikilink the first mention of the term steals to Steal (basketball)
 * Wikilink the sole mention in the prose of the term blocks to Block (basketball)
 * Wikilink the term overtime to Overtime (sports)

Personal life

 * "Edwards' mother, Yvette, and his grandmother, Shirley," - remove "his" from this portion of text
 * "He has worn the No. 5 basketball jersey" - the No. term should have the abbr template used on it and displayed as follows; {{xt|{{Abbr|No.|Number}}