Talk:Anthony Harrison/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 22:48, 19 January 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Harper J. Cole (talk · contribs) 19:22, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

I'll take this one on. --Harper J. Cole (talk) 19:22, 10 April 2024 (UTC)


 * and An inconsistency: "the" precedes the college's name the second time but not the first time.
 * Fixed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Wikilink "hitting .512" to Batting average (baseball).
 * Linked. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Also wikilink senior and Sophomore.
 * Linked. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It looks like only one teammate was injured (cornerback Mike Travis). Another, Toby Lantz moved position to cover for him, leaving a gap at safety that Harrison filled.
 * Fixed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Maybe add that he was back playing the following week?
 * I'm not sure the source says that. What were you proposing? « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * You could add that he was waived in preseason to make it clearer that he missed out on making the full squad.
 * Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It's also worth stating that he didn't keep his place in the squad when the strike ended. I couldn't find any sources stating that specifically, but here's one listing the sixteen replacement players who stayed on the roster, with Harrison not among them.
 * Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * His rather common name makes it hard to search for sources, but I did find one more reference, to him returning to college and graduating after his career. Worth adding?
 * Added. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Other than that, all looking good. Harper J. Cole (talk) 20:24, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I think I have addressed/responded to everything . Thank you! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk)  @ 21:50, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Thanks, I think that looks good now. As you say, the source doesn't specifically mention him returning from the injury, and it's already established that he was in all three replacement games. I'll promote the article now. Harper J. Cole (talk) 23:00, 10 April 2024 (UTC)