Talk:Anticipating/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 11:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)

I will be reviewing the song article against GA criteria. --Legolas ( talk 2 me ) 11:06, 17 March 2010 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for criteria)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * See below
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * See below
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * See below
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * See below
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:

OK. The prose and MOS issues are the main concerns. Here are they.


 * Lead ✅
 * 1) "Anticipating" is a song by American recording artist Britney Spears from her third studio album Britney. --> There should be a comma after Spears.
 * 2) written by Spears and produced --> "while" in place of "and"
 * 3) Madonna and Rick Astley needs to be wikilinked.
 * 4) comma after 2002.
 * 5) Avoid continuous repetition of the phrase "The song".


 * Background ✅
 * 1) and produced by --> ", while produced by"
 * 2) The song was mixed at the latter studio by Stephen George --> Rephrase
 * 3) the song is written in the key of F major --> So wrong. A song can't be written in a key of music. It is composed in a key.


 * Reception ✅
 * 1) No need to two subsections as the chart performance consists of just one line. Combine them into a single section.
 * Live performance
 * 1) The performance began a video interlude --> 'with a video interlude
 * 2) appeared onstage --> comma after onstage


 * Tracklising ✅
 * 1) Unsourced
 * 2) en-dash is upposed to be used


 * References ✅
 * 1) Online sources like MTV etc are not to be italicized.
 * 2) En-dash in place of normal dashes.
 * 3) No caps in the title of references.


 * External link ✅
 * 1) WP:SPAM link. Doesnot contain anything related to the song. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 11:21, 17 March 2010 (UTC)


 * Image ✅
 * File:Anticipating music video.jpg is a blantant violation of WP:NFCC for living person as it is directly from the tour, for which a free replaceable image is easily available.
 * There are currently no free replaceable images from the performance. Should i remove the image anyway? Xwomanizerx (talk) 17:35, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Yes. If no free image is available at presetn, then remove it. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 03:39, 18 March 2010 (UTC)
 * Done. Xwomanizerx (talk) 19:58, 22 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm keeping the article on hold for seven days to resolve the issues. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 11:21, 17 March 2010 (UTC)
 * I'm passing this article. --Legolas  ( talk 2 me ) 05:08, 23 March 2010 (UTC)