Talk:Antimonumento 5J/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 21:45, 6 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)

I will be reviewing this, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk) 15:06, 2 July 2024 (UTC)


 * @Tbhotch Here are my comments. :) Arconning (talk) 13:08, 3 July 2024 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * protests of 4, 5, The artwork was installed on 5 June 2023, authorities removed the sculpture, add a comma at the end.
 * monument be reinstalled,, add to after monument.
 * Optional. Citation in the lead is alright but if you could mention it in the body and remove the citation in the lead, that would be alright.
 * Removed. It was for the DYK.

Background

 * Giovanni died of head trauma from a blunt object,, remove comma.
 * Mex$, US$, link to the denominations.
 * Somebody once told me that money would fall into WP:OVERLINK


 * According to the family, they refused the payment,, After Floyd's murder,, remove comma.
 * The video became viral,, change became to went, and remove the comma.
 * who were reported as forcibly disappeared., replace as to to have.
 * "El Halconazo", add a comma at the end.

History and installation

 * on the opposite side of the State Government Palace, add a comma at the end.
 * another anti-monument, add was at the end.
 * Giovanni's case was not isolated and, add that at the end.
 * the lights in the plaza were turned off, add a comma at the end.

Replica and ordered reinstallation

 * for installation was submitted, add a comma at the end.
 * consult with the state civil protection, remove the.
 * Firefighters rejected the reinstallation, add a comma at the end.
 * and that (being made of steel) it could cause electric problems,, remove comma.
 * is one meter shorter, convert to imperial system as well.

Images

 * All have proper licenses, just be careful on the second to last one.

Refs

 * Random reference check: 1, 8, 15, 19, 27, good!
 * Earwig and manual check seems great.

Misc

 * No ongoing edit war, broad and focused information about the background of the topic and the topic itself, neutral.
 * Thanks for the review, I have completed most of the concerns. (CC) Tb hotch ™ 18:11, 3 July 2024 (UTC)
 * @Tbhotch You should mention in the body that the monument was built due to his death and the protests relating to his death. I believe that's my last comment, and we'll be set! Arconning (talk) 04:21, 4 July 2024 (UTC)


 * Comment: Thanks for reviewing, Arconning. For the record, I support the promotion of this article, assuming all of your concerns are addressed appropriately. Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 14:35, 4 July 2024 (UTC)
 * Added, and thanks. (CC) Tb hotch ™ 02:34, 5 July 2024 (UTC)