Talk:Antioch chalice

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From Prof Mc: Charity, You've really done a good job of pulling together material on this piece, and I just have a few revisions for you to consider: Please touch base if you have any questions as you revise! AMcClanan (talk) 17:16, 25 November 2017 (UTC)AMcClanan
 * make sure to link to other Wikipedia entries, so that proper names like Antioch and religious terms and figures like Christ are tied to their larger entry. Similarly, once your entry goes live, go back and create a few links from other entries to yours so that it's not an orphan.
 * give the full name for the Met as Metropolitan Museum
 * I wonder if metric measurements would be clearer, the fractions of inches are a little unwieldy
 * Is there more to be said about the Holy Grail piece? It's such an interesting element of the object's misadventures
 * also, why not incorporate some detail images to illustrate the points you make?
 * since you allude to it being bent out of shape, you might discuss its condition when it was found, the restoration process, etc

Feedback
1.) More links. There are quite a few things that can be linked on here, suck as The Cloisters, and the World's Fair you mentioned. 2.) On a whole, I really enjoy this article and I hope my final draft ends up looking and sounding a lot more like yours than it currently does. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bluestarsjay (talk • contribs) 18:28, 28 November 2017 (UTC)