Talk:Anton Dohrn Seamount/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 01:41, 16 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria
1. Prose ✅

2. Verifiability ✅

3. Depth of Coverage ✅

4. Neutral ✅

5. Stable ✅

6. Illustrations ✅

7. Miscellaneous ✅

Comments
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 * "moat in the sediment that surround the seamount." - Surrounds, not surround
 * Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Show map of Oceans around British Isles" - Should oceans be capitalized?
 * Maybe, but I admit that I don't know where to make an edit to change that. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * It's unchangeable it looks like, it appears it results from infobox/map template defaults that can't really be changed.
 * "an over 2,000 metres (6,600 ft) submarine depression of unclear origin" 2,000 metres what? Long or deep?
 * Deep; fixed that. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "45 kilometres (28 mi)[10]-40 kilometres (25 mi) wide" - Should be an endash, I believe
 * Fixed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "which define a transitional to alkaline suite." - Is there an article for this meaning of suite that this can be linked to?
 * Not as far as I know. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Suite (geology) is a redirect to Petrology, is that the intended meaning?
 * Yes. Linked that and updated suite to reflect the existence of that link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 15:22, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Iceland plume is a duplink
 * Eocene is a duplink
 * Done both. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * "Finally, the bivalve Xylophaga anselli was found" - "was" implies it is no longer found there. If that is not true, "has been" would be better
 * Aye, changed this. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Parasitic cones and parasitic vents are essentially duplinks, as they redirect to the same place, only the first instance should be kept.
 * Resolved this. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Same with cold water coral reefs and cold water coral
 * Changed. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Bamboo corals is a duplink
 * Changed, as the below. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Same with soft corals and sponges

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 * The refs with page ranges should have en dashes, instead of the short dashes
 * I think that's an issue with the CS1/2 templates. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 10:06, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * It looks like you're using sfn templates for a lot of the refs, and I've had this come up in reviews of articles I submitted to GAN. There may be a script that can change this, but what I did with the articles I worked on was either manually insert the endash character or use the endash template to insert one.

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Placing on hold, this one's in pretty good shape. Hog Farm (talk) 04:29, 16 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I got the rest of the dashes, the endash can also be inserted through the special characters tab at the top of the edit window. Passing now. Hog Farm (talk) 16:01, 16 April 2020 (UTC)