Talk:Antonieta Rosa Gomes

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 15 October 2018 and 15 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Sydney french12.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:26, 17 January 2022 (UTC)

Peer Review
Hey Sydney,

When looking at your article, it is very informative. One improvement that I could suggest for the article would be more info on the college to Minister of Justice role. It states that she goes to college and then immediately goes straight into the role of Minister of Justice role with no knowledge of how she got there. This could bring more insight to your article for sure. Another change that could take place would be the depth of the article in terms of Antonieta's life. The article primarily focuses on her in her terms of power and not of her entire life. Knowing the full biography of Antonieta would allow the reader to more successfully connect with the material and give a clearer view. The structure is one of the first things I noticed about this article and I like how you put all of the events in chronological order, making ti easier to piece together for readers. Really good job on maintaining the structure of the article. I don't think you need to make any huge changes on your paper rather than the fact that a little more depth in details can greatly affect the article as whole. Good job Sydney and I hope you apply my feedback to make this article as best as it can be!Ecd5gd (talk) 05:57, 30 November 2018 (UTC)