Talk:Anxiety threshold

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Psych 101 evaluation
All you get here is a definition, but there are terms in it that are not clarified or identified. For example:
 * What constitutes 'performance'?
 * What/where is the actual threshold?
 * Is it measurable by one or more tests? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Calvinsimmons87 (talk • contribs) 04:12, 14 September 2011 (UTC)

Psych edited 101
This article needs to be edited because it is too short. Also, it only covers the basic information of the topic which there is much more to this topic so it is not very resourceful. it also repeats itself a lot which is not a good sign. it uses definition words like Anxiety threshold in its definition which is not good.--BBWiki11 (talk) 01:42, 19 September 2011 (UTC)BBWiki11 This article needs to have sources and places you can go from this page to help people with more information. Maybe putting what causes anxiety threshold and how people can help overcome this if they think they have it. Or even what falls under the anxiety threshold.Bwebbie12 (talk) 20:06, 19 September 2011 (UTC)

Evaluation psych101-52
This article is entirely too vague. There is a huge lack of information to help a reader to understand what an anxiety threshold is. For example, this sentence, "The people with anxiety that causes them to view life in a troubling manner is where people reach anxiety threshold." Not only is that sentence poorly written which adds to the challenge of interpreting the information, but it doesn't explain what a troubling manner even means. Therefore after reading that sentence I still don't know what the anxiety threshold entails. The writer gives a couple of examples of anxiety disorders such as generalized anxiety disorder, Obsessive-compulsive disorder, and panic disorder, but it doesn't explain what any of the symptoms are to explain or define what those disorders mean. There is one example of panic disorder, but it only describes how long it can last. What is it that can last from minutes to hours with a panic attack if a person has a panic disorder? This article seems to me like a very poor definition of what an anxiety threshold is and there isn't enough information because I still don't feel like I understand the term from reading this. Chase6605 (talk) 04:05, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

Reading this article doesn't give you much clarification. It stated that it affects a person's performance, does that mean to function a doing a job, school work, or sports? My understanding is that your performance will be poor with everything until I get a better understanding. Is financial threshold the main issue or can the threshold be triggered by other things?(Sydney Taylor) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sydney lillady (talk • contribs) 02:20, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Information/Sources Added
As part of Assignment 2 of this course:I added information from 4 sources (cited) to create a more substantial article. Their article is still in need of a lead and additional information. Sarahmarjoriesmith (talk) 20:58, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

Sarah Kimes Peer Review
First, The entire article should be reexamined for bias, I found that, while it uses some technical language, it sounds very biased. The below entry/paragraph is the one I would concentrate on for bias Particularity in the first lines review is needed:

An anxiety threshold is the level of anxiety that, when reached, will affect a person's performance. Anxiety is a distasteful emotion, similar to fear, that is created by insecurities in one’s abilities, concerns for the future, such as financial or situational circumstances, or memories of frightening experiences. Anxiety can affect all age groups and if fears are irrational may cause mental disorders.[1] An individual's anxiety threshold can be measured by the amount of anxiety consistently manifested from situation to situation.[2]

I do work in the mental healthcare field so I am fairly familiar with the subject, and I would suggest creating sections of information such as:

Origin/History-Who first discovered/diagnosed the condition, and how were the first treatments performed; if any? Its connection to other mental health conditions

Then something like Signs and Symptoms of Anxiety Thresholds

Then (sub-heading) Types of Anxiety Thresholds evidenced in other mental health conditions/Anxiety Disorders

Then (heading) Treatments and Diagnosis process.

(Subheading) Professionals who can Diagnose and treat this condition

A references section, of course.

Some places you can look for information; should you be interested, of course; DSM V (DSM VI and III could be used but the standard choice of Mental healthcare providers is the DSM V) The National Alliance on Mental Illness may have information on this subject, as could the National Institute of Mental Health, Psychology journals and Psychology Today (While this is an article website it also is used to link people to therapists by type of service and is often read and referenced by professionals with peer-reviewed articles.)Sarahkimes (talk) 18:16, 28 July 2018 (UTC)

Most text is off-topic
Most of the text in this article is off-topic. For example, the "measures of anxiety" subsection discusses Anxiety but has nothing specific about thresholds. The Causes section also has nothing specific about thresholds. The Treatments section is also about Anxiety but not about thresholds. I think this article should probably be merged with the Anxiety article. ParticipantObserver (talk) 09:24, 1 October 2018 (UTC)

== Psych 322 Evaluate an Article67.61.101.3 (talk) 20:17, 1 October 2020 (UTC) 67.61.101.3 (talk) 20:15, 1 October 2020 (UTC) ==

The article has a great structure to it. There is valid information, but not enough detail or sources to back their claims or define constructs. For example, they define anxiety threshold but never actually explain at what point a person reaches that threshold. In addition, the symptoms section is very short. There should be more substance and sources in each paragraph to expound upon the information that is being given to make it more credible. Another thing that I thought of that should be changed is the section titled "Home Remedies". It makes it sound like it's a cold or flu and you can alleviate symptoms easily. I feel that it doesn't do justice to how much anxiety threshold affects people and should be changed to a different title. Also, in that section, there are no sources to back the information that can help a person who has reached the anxiety threshold. Overall, there is great content in the article, but there are still a lot of improvements that need to be made. 67.61.101.3 (talk) 20:16, 1 October 2020 (UTC) 67.61.101.3 (talk) 20:15, 1 October 2020 (UTC)

Changing Treatment to Managment
I think that the section on treatment should be changed to management because the word treatment suggests that you can take this medicine or you can do this home remedy and the problem will just go away. I think the word management better describes that section because anxiety is something people must manage and try to control. The topic is anxiety THRESHOLD, meaning there is a point when there is too much anxiety to manage. The section should be called management, or anxiety management because it is geared toward informing others on ways to manage their anxiety so they don't reach that threshold. Breckann (talk) 02:58, 20 November 2021 (UTC)

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