Talk:Apep (star system)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: AHeneen (talk · contribs) 22:00, 26 February 2019 (UTC)

Hey, ! Thanks for putting in the time and effort to review this article for GA status! I greatly appreciate it! I want to respond to the three points that you've made in this review. You're correct in your assumption that I do not have access to the paywalled Nature Astronomy article. I have no idea whether or not there have been any significant changes made between the draft and the final published version, but I personally doubt that there were any. IFL Science! is not currently mentioned on either Potentially unreliable sources or Deprecated sources, so I think it's fine to use it as a source with common sense caution, in which I believe to have exercised. On your suggestion to add the animation you linked, there would simply be not enough space for that in the article, I'm afraid. In this screenshot you can see how the Starbox/infobox on the right completely overlaps the "Characteristics" section, meaning that if an image were placed on the right, it would be pushed down to the "Observation" section, and potentially overlap the "See also" section. Placing it on the left will cause a mountain of formatting issues, too. It would be great if the article was large enough to allow an illustration to be placed there, but I cannot imagine how any further expansion of this article can occur with the limited amount of citations available to us about Apep currently. Thanks again for the review! – PhilipTerryGraham (talk &middot;&#32;articles &middot;&#32;reviews) 00:15, 3 March 2019 (UTC)

I would state here that while the Nature Astronomy article is paywalled, the final version of the paper is open access on arXiv here: https://arxiv.org/pdf/1811.06985.pdf. This also means you can fix a quote in the Wikipedia article that references 'dragon's coil' rather than correctly stating 'serpent's coil'. --Ajihood (talk) 15:55, 4 April 2019 (UTC)