Talk:Apocrypha (The X-Files)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Gen. Quon (talk · contribs) 17:15, 23 January 2012 (UTC)

Checking against GA criteria

 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * Again, "The episode is one of those which helped to explore the series' overarching mythology." I feel this is kind of a clunky why to write this, maybe say "The episode helps to explore and expand the series' overarching mythology."
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  03:24, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
 * LEAD, no summary or mention of production
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  03:24, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Just before the lead plot summary, maybe add, "In this episode..." I think it helps to separate fact from fiction
 * Done. GRAPPLE   X  03:24, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Infobox, maybe cite where you found all the guests stars at the very bottom, maybe after "Tegan Moss as Young Dana Scully" Is there a way to put a cite after the words "Guest stars"?
 * Done. Also culled a few names off the bottom, the list looked far too long and crufty at a second glance. GRAPPLE   X  03:24, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * All good
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * Thorough coverage, no sign of trivia
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * Neural POV
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * No edit warring
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * One picture, properly tagged. Are there any other free pictures to spice up the production section, it's kind of boring right now?
 * The only relevant one I could think of was the one of Spotnitz and Carter together, since they co-wrote the episode. Tried looked for an example of the magnetic fluid they rejected as a black oil prop, but it's definitely not a ferrofluid and there's nothing else I could see about magnetic fluids. GRAPPLE   X  03:24, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:36, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Alrighty, I like the look. I pass! The magnetic fluid would've been cool, but oh well. :P--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:48, 24 January 2012 (UTC)
 * On hold for seven days for above issues to be addressed.--Gen. Quon (talk) 19:36, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
 * Alrighty, I like the look. I pass! The magnetic fluid would've been cool, but oh well. :P--Gen. Quon (talk) 15:48, 24 January 2012 (UTC)