Talk:Apodemia mormo

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Hello! My name is Emily Haussler and I'm part of a Behavioral Ecology class at Washington University in St. Louis. I have been assigned to investigate Apodemia mormo and improve this article. So far, I have made the following changes: 1. Add Tribe and Conservation Status to the Taxobox 2. Create overarching outline and add new content, with specific focuses on habitat, geographic range, conservation, genetics, life cycle, physiology, oviposition, and feeding habits. 3. Removed old content verbatim, and reincorporated it into the new article, preserving references

Please let me know of questions, concerns or improvements I could address.

Thanks! Emilykh26 (talk) 01:31, 3 October 2017 (UTC)

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Minor edits
Hi Emily, your article was very well written and covered a wide variety of topics well. I added a small section on a parasite, made minor edits with wording and grammar, and added some hyperlinks for easier browsing. I could find no inconsistencies with the information presented even after checking through sources. This article could benefit from a section on interactions with humans, as you touch on that in your conservation section. Nice job! liu.emily (talk) 12:30, 6 October 2017 (UTC)

I have made a few minor edits, mostly italicizing species names, adding hyperlinks on a few words, and correcting typos. I have also added an image of the butterfly feeding on nectar. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uhm.s (talk • contribs) 13:34, 4 October 2017 (UTC)

Hi! Your article was impressively thorough. I just deleted the extra spaces at the beginning of a few sentences and fixed the titles (e.g. “Geographic Range” to “Geographic range” – I think the latter is the common Wikipedia format). The second paragraph under the Habitat section might also be more relevant to the Food resources section. I’d also suggest providing a brief introduction to each of the researchers you mention (Wick, Scott, and Crawford). Great job!! BoozalisHannah (talk) 05:37, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Hey Emily, great article! I would suggest changing the language of the Habitat paragraph to a more general statement rather than directly referencing a study. Other than that it looks fantastic! Srosefuqua (talk) 01:05, 1 December 2017 (UTC)

Tribe Emesini
It appears the tribe Emesini Stichel, 1911 (based on Emesis) is preoccupied by Emesini Amyot and Serville, 1843 (based on Emesa). See here. In any case, Apodemia seems to be regarded as a genus incertae sedis at the moment. I think the taxobox for the species will be fine without a tribe parameter. William Avery (talk) 20:21, 6 October 2017 (UTC)