Talk:Apollo, Apollo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: JuneGloom07    Talk?  12:31, 29 May 2010 (UTC)

Good morning/afternoon/evening. I just happened to stumble across this article, wondered if it was at GAN and it was! You've done some good work here. :) The images are fine and you have no dead or dab links. There's only a couple of things that need fixing;


 * "Carlock won the award for Episodic Comedy for this episode of 30 Rock, tieing Modern Family's Steven Levitan and Christopher Lloyd" - I think you're missing a "with" (tieing with Modern Family ' s Steven Levitan).
 * Added "with". -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  20:16, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Some of the publishers in the refs are either unlinked or linked, I think for consistency all of the ones that can be linked should be (Yahoo!, IMDb, etc).
 * Did a consistency.
 * Ref 25 ("'30 Rock': Am I Lizzing or Jacking?") is missing a publisher.
 * Added publisher info.

That's it, let me know when you've corrected these (or if you have any questions) and I'll pass the article. - JuneGloom07    Talk?  12:31, 29 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the review, it is most appreciated. Also, thank you for the kind words towards the article, that means a lot. :) -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  20:16, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Great, I've passed the article. :) - JuneGloom07    Talk?  21:02, 30 May 2010 (UTC)
 * Thanks again. ;) -- ThinkBlue   (Hit   BLUE)  21:10, 30 May 2010 (UTC)