Talk:Appears/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:56, 15 August 2016 (UTC)

Hey CaliforniaDreamsFan! Sorry for my long departure in the reviewing process, but I'll likely be doing a few more here and there. Since I'm not longer in the GA Cup, my reviews will just be coming in a bulleted list versus my previous section-by-section style. Here it goes:
 * Remove "units" after "physical sales"
 * "Musically, "Appears" is an dance song. It is written in third person perspective, and is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship." --> "Musically, "Appears" is an dance song written in third person perspective, and is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship."
 * "300,000 unit" --> "300,000 units"
 * I think you could connect the bottom two paragraphs in the lead
 * "long-time" --> "longtime"
 * "She stated that the song is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship. "It's about lovers..." --> "She stated that the song is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship: "It's about lovers..."
 * ""Appears" was released by Avex Trax on November 10, 1999 as the sixth single from the album, which was also released on the same day. " --> Source?
 * "2005–2006" --> "2005-06"
 * "criticised" --> "criticized"
 * "It lasted three weeks on the top 200, one of Hamasaki's lowest spanning singles in that chart." --> "It lasted three weeks on the top 200, becoming one of Hamasaki's lowest spanning singles in that chart."
 * Add "2000" in parentheses after Super Eurobeat Presents Ayu-ro Mix
 * Don't have to include "in 1999" for the "Recording" process
 * Use two columns for the "Personnel" section please
 * Too many countries in the "Digital download" section on the table; do you think this is necessary if at all?

GA review (see here for criteria)

 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * A PD image and/or quote box may help break up the text.
 * No edit wars etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * A PD image and/or quote box may help break up the text.
 * A PD image and/or quote box may help break up the text.

On hold to allow for changes. Good luck as always. Carbrera (talk) 03:05, 15 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Hi Cabrera! No its all goods, no need to explain All finished with the adjustments and editing, good luck and regards! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk &middot;&#32;contribs} 01:24, 17 August 2016 (UTC)