Talk:Apple Macintosh/to do

FAC objections:
 * Article is still a bit too long (aim for <40k?) (in progress; current size considered okay)
 * Advertising section needs heavy copyediting and condensing
 * Explain more technical terms and people inline
 * Add a key, explaining color-coding on: Timeline of Macintosh models (listed here because this is the only use of the template) this still needs the attention of someone who knows more about macs than I do