Talk:Apple bong

I have a general idea of what to write about, but I don't know how to make it suitable for the encyclopedia. Please rearrange and edit mercilessly. CancerOfJuly

Pictures
Better pictures would really help this article. If anyone is feeling artistic, please help out.

Instructional tone of voice
The subject matter and facts seem on point, however the tone is too instructional. Could be rewritten in a more general objective manner.

from VfD
On 10 June 2005, this article was nominated for deletion. See Votes for deletion/Apple bong for a record of the discussion.