Talk:Appu Chesi Pappu Koodu/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)

Reviewing this article tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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Plot

 * "he sends goons to attack him." - Goons is informal
 * How about a "mobster"?
 * Yes I think that is more appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
 * "Usha, is strained and attempts to marry her off are thwarted." - Who made the attempts for marriage?
 * Ramalingam made the attempts and Govindam thwarted them. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.
 * What exactly is meant that Ramadasu learns his lesson?
 * He comes to terms with the reality and apologises for his misdeeds. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.

Production

 * "N. T. Rama Rao and Savitri were chosen for the leads," - leading parts
 * Done

Music

 * "Cheyi Cheyi Kaluparave" was parodied by the Indian National Congress as a part of their election campaign during the 1989 general elections." - remove "a"
 * Done

Release, reception and legacy

 * "considered the Laurel and Hardy of Telugu cinema at the time." - considered by whom?
 * It was a film historian's opinion. I have tweaked it accordingly.