Talk:April in Quahog/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xtzou ( Talk ) 17:06, 16 May 2010 (UTC)


 * The is a well written article. I have only a few comments:


 * Plot
 * "However, he and his children share no common interests and Peter only makes things worse by using the methamphetamine he had wanted to share with Chris." - uses it for what?
 * Done. Gage (talk) 21:22, 16 May 2010 (UTC)


 * Cultural references
 * "Peter is confronted by Brian who reveals that the only reason he was selected was due to the fact that he had only voted in the last election." - does it mean that the only election he ever voted in was the last election?
 * Yes, are you trying to indicate something?
 * "Peter goes on to state that he actually stuffed the ballot box at the Oscars, when the nominees included Grover from Sesame Street, Bluto from Popeye, and Daniel Day-Lewis, among others. Actress Anne Hathaway presented the award." - I don't see the connection.
 * The sequence immediately followed the election comment. There's no more connection present in the article than what was present in the episode. Gage (talk) 21:22, 16 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "Going on to find out that everyone is asked to do jury duty" - does his mean "Learning the everyone is asked to do jury duty..."? How is this like being kicked out of Coldplay?
 * I didn't write the episode, that's just the reference that was made. Gage (talk) 21:22, 16 May 2010 (UTC)
 * "Further attempting to be kicked out, Peter begins singing the song" - is this referring to jury duty?
 * Fixed.

Otherwise, everything seems fine.

Xtzou ( Talk ) 17:06, 16 May 2010 (UTC)

 GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality: Good
 * B. MoS compliance: Complies with basic  MoS
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources: Reliable sources
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary: Well referenced
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects: Sets the context
 * B. Focused: Remains focused on the subject
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!
 * Pass or Fail: Pass!

Congratulations! Xtzou ( Talk ) 22:37, 16 May 2010 (UTC)