Talk:Archaeological and Anthropological Society of Victoria

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Initial cut and paste before editing was saved prematurely, but has now been reworded to avoid any copying issues.

Garyvines
 * While I see that it has been rewritten somewhat, the first paragraph still contains phrases which are drawn directly from the source and need to be removed or rewritten (e.g., "remained an active member of the society until his untimely and sudden death in 1984"). VernoWhitney (talk) 17:54, 21 October 2010 (UTC)

OK - I think I have taken out all the offending bits - there probably needs to be a bit more about the society added though - I might see if I can drum up some help Garyvines (talk) 23:28, 21 October 2010 (UTC)

I have taken off the close paraphrasing tag as I think I have addressed this now Garyvines (talk) 02:22, 22 October 2010 (UTC)
 * Thank you for rewriting it so promptly! VernoWhitney (talk) 03:05, 22 October 2010 (UTC)

I removed the coi| tag, and added a further reference, in response to claim that a major contributor had a close association.Garyvines (talk) 02:38, 3 December 2010 (UTC)