Talk:Archibald Spencer/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 13:53, 5 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after "as a businessman".


 * What is the purpose of the Edinburgh image?
 * ✅ Removed.


 * "Edinburgh, Scotland, Adam" - split these sentences


 * "and a male midwife and" - repetitive use of "and"


 * Boston Evening Post Boston Evening-Post


 * Wikilink The Boston Weekly Post-Boy


 * the Boston Weekly Post-Boy The Boston Weekly Post-Boy


 * the Pennsylvania Gazette The Pennsylvania Gazette


 * "metallic fragments move" "metallic fragments to move"


 * Add a comma after "after that".


 * Can #Religion be merged with #Death as #Personal_life_and_death?


 * All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks. --Doug Coldwell (talk) 19:58, 5 July 2021 (UTC)