Talk:Archips cerasivorana

Possible areas for improvement
I think this article is off to a good start but it could use some more information on the behavior of the moth itself. Also I know there is a gallery at the end, but a picture at the beginning of the article would be helpful. Maximilianzhang (talk) 23:06, 8 October 2013 (UTC)
 * Nice work! You can put the pictures in the text, but then remove them from the gallery. There is no need to have the same picture twice.. Ruigeroeland (talk) 06:38, 9 October 2013 (UTC)

The article looks great so far! I agree that you could use a little more description about the behavior of the moth (most of it is about the caterpillar). I mainly went through and fixed some grammatical errors, but otherwise, the article looks fine. Ashleynlin (talk) 17:31, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Improving this article
This article contains a lot of good information, but should be expanded. As to Wikipedia good article standards, the lead should not include any new information, but rather summarize the entire article. For example, the diet of the adults and larvae are only mentioned in the lead, but not anywhere else in the article; a diet section should be added. It would be nice to have a picture next to the lead, as well as others throughout the article. The distribution section needs to be edited for grammatical errors. There are also hardly any links to any other pages; adding these would make the page more dynamic. LibbyWard (talk) 21:51, 20 November 2013 (UTC)

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