Talk:Ard Matthews

Tone problems
This article is not written like an encyclopedia article. E.g. "his indelible lyrics and melody arrangements led the way to the incredible success of their debut album". It's written like a magazine article. Poor stuff. 130.88.141.34 (talk) 15:21, 17 May 2012 (UTC)

Tone problems as mentioned above have been rectified and/or removed in accordance with the Wikipedia tone guidelines. Lomax69 (talk) 23:46, 18 July 2012 (UTC)

Tone problems still a problem
I agree with above user. A poorly written article that sounds more like a magazine article. using words like grom isn't very Wikipedia like. 196.215.72.183 (talk) 15:22, 20 August 2012 (UTC)