Talk:Ardeshir Tarapore

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 * Link works and seems useful. Dhtwiki (talk) 09:02, 30 November 2016 (UTC)

Copy edit
Some observations: I have been on the bold side with my edits, so could you check them carefully. Gog the Mild (talk) 16:26, 30 May 2018 (UTC)
 * Is there no more on his WWII experience?
 * IMO the "Battle of Chawinda" section needs an initial sentence introducing the war, and possibly the reason for it.
 * IMO, immediately after this, you need to state briefly what I Corps' plan was, that Poona Horse was a part of I Corps, and where PH's plan fitted into I Corps' plan.
 * Your edits are excellent. Thanks for your comments, I'll work on them. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk &bull;&#32;mail) 06:21, 1 June 2018 (UTC)
 * No problem; and thank you. I assume that you are going for GA with this, so I tried to pitch my copy edit at that level. Good luck with it. Gog the Mild (talk) 08:55, 1 June 2018 (UTC)