Talk:Ariel Sharon/Archive 2

First Paragraph
It is saddening to see what is happening with the first paragraph of this article, as it may be a sign of what bad things can happen with Wikipedia once it reaches a large-enough audiance - repeated useless editings that don't improve anything and just modify for the sake of modification, resulting in a slow drift into utter crap.

A few months ago, there were edit wars about the first paragraph. Some people made it say "Sharon is a war hero" and other made it say "Sharon is a war criminal", with the two camps constantly replacing the other camp's agenda by their own. The obvious solution was to do what I did: say that Sharon is regarded as a war hero by a majority of Israelis (the word "majority" I used here was proved when he was voted into office using this reputation), but he is regarded otherwise by other Israelis (some of those who voted against him) and by many other people around the world. The first paragraph as I wrote it was:


 * Sharon is highly controversial figure in and outside Israel. Many Israelis view him as a war hero, who helped defend the country in some of its greatest struggles, and as such he was voted into office. However, a significant number of Israelis, as well as much of the rest of the world, consider some of his actions to have been war crimes, and feel that his recent actions have been damaging the peace process. Most infamous were his actions during the 1982 Lebanon War (see below).

Now we have:


 * Sharon is a highly controversial figure in and outside Israel. Many Israelis view him as a war hero, and at present as a strong ruler determined to fight terrorism. However, a number of Israelis, as well as much of the Arab world, and certain other countires consider some of his past actions to have been war crimes, and feel that his recent actions have been damaging to the peace process. Most infamous were his actions as Defense Minister during the 1982 Lebanon War (see below).

Look at this, and at what we have today, and tell me if the slow drift did any good to this first paragraph. "Randomly" removing sentences that certain people didn't like for some reason, and at other times adding other sentences that certain people thought were "missing". I'm not saying the current version is bad - it is certainly better than the edit wars we used to have over this paragraph (which proves that my decision to write it like I did was correct) - but it makes me wonder about the continued quality of wikipedia in the future. Nyh 12:22, 22 May 2004 (UTC)

And the drift continues.... Now, two months later, we have:
 * Sharon is a highly controversial figure both inside and outside Israel, attracting diverse and often polar views. Thus many Israelis, a significant number of Jews worldwide and many foreign observers regard Sharon as a war hero and a strong leader in the fight against terrorism. On the other hand, a number of Israelis and foreign observers believe that his recent efforts have been damaging to the peace process. Sharon's most stringent critics have in the past sought his prosecution as a war criminal, on the grounds of his actions as Israeli Defense Minister during 1982 Lebanon War.

Yes, it's different all right, but better? I don't think so, and I wonder who does. Let's bet that it will drift some more when I sample it again in two more months... 16:25, 20 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Continuing to document the drift, 3 months later:


 * ''Sharon is a controversial figure both inside and outside Israel, attracting diverse and often polar views. Many Israelis, a significant number of Jews worldwide and many foreign observers regard Sharon as a war hero and a strong leader in the fight against terrorism. On the other hand, a number of Israelis and foreign observers believe that his recent efforts have been damaging to the peace process. Sharon's supporters have described him as "a hero", "practical man", while his critics have called him a "terrorist", "lout", "sissy", and "spoiled parvenu" and sought his prosecution as a war criminal for his actions as Israeli Defense Minister during the 1982 Lebanon War. Still others have described him as a "de facto dove", and American President George W. Bush has described him as a "duly elected official in a democracy" and a "man of peace".

Oh well. I'm not saying this version is worse - the point I'm trying to make is this: this paragraph doesn't stop transforming. And it might never stop.

Nyh 08:56, 24 Oct 2004 (UTC)

Ten more months have passed, and it's time for another snapshot. This time, the entire paragraph that I added over a year ago and mutated so much since, has been deleted by User:Amirpedia on July 12th, and nobody restored it since. What will happen now is pretty obvious - someone will add a sentence "Sharon is a war criminal", someone else will change it to a "war hero", someone will come along and write a paragraph to please them both, and a year later someone will simply delete that paragraph. And the cycle continues, ad nauseam.

The pagraph in question, just before it was deleted, had already mutated into the following form:


 * Sharon is a controversial figure, both inside and outside Israel, attracting diverse and often polar views. Many Israelis and supporters of Israel regard Sharon as a strong leader battling terrorism. Conversely, most Arabs and supporters of the Arab-Palestinian cause and some other critics refer to him as "the Butcher of Beirut" and have sought his prosecution as a war criminal.

WHO'S CALL?!?!

Is it by this justifaction of one person that we ALL should be unable to type information about the Prime Minister? I think it it strange to have disabled us from adding and 'tweeking' information because of an opinion. It's weak.

Nyh 13:39, 18 July 2005 (UTC) .

A terrorist if there ever was one

 * And your point is... JFW | T@lk  21:19, 3 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * My point is you may as well change NPOV to JPOV (Jewish POV) in regards to Holocaust/Palestinian related pages, because that's what these pages are. Unsigned by User: Merrick.


 * Merrick, you are free to change the POV as you see fit. Your litany above does little for your cause. If you can find a way to express "Holo-hoax" and "arab-killer" in POV-neutral terms they may even end up not being reverted. JFW | T@lk  23:54, 3 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * I'm not touching this one. I'm sure jpmorgan would revert it anyway, he seems to have issues with the truth.


 * I've got this nagging feeling that many people have issues with your truth. JFW | T@lk  18:19, 4 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * Interesting... someone calling Israel a "bandit state" and complaining about NPOV in the same post... at any rate, all the above NPOV discussions have been either resolved, or let go over 3 weeks ago; why is the POV warning still there? TheProject 07:31, 24 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * Yes, because your view is extremely NPOV as one can easily see, with such non-biased, non-inflammatory comments as "Why do you think the Israelies elected him? Because he was a famous arab-killer!" and "bandit state." If there is an anti-semite here, it's most certainly you.


 * I am certainly not going to try to imply that I know alot on this subject, but some information did come to light thanks to the president of Iran yesterday. I learned that Sharon was found to be directly responsible for some massacres in 1982, which could have cost the lives to more people than in 9/11...what do you call that? Robert Taylor 19:44, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Sharon's provocative visit to Temple Mount
First of, I've found lots of sources claiming that the Al-Aqsa intifada was "ignited" or "sparked" by Sharon's visit to the Temple Mount, many fewer that claims it was "started" by it. Second, Israel may very well have claimed that "the Al-Aqsa Intifada was engineered by Yasser Arafat as a leverage tool," but the source offered; (a cite by Yassir Arafat in which he "warns of new intifada" from 1998) does not back up what the article states. Palestine-info 16:58, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * "Ignited" and "sparked" are inflammatory language, if you'll pardon the pun. "Started" certainly provides the same meaning in a NPOV way.  As for the second issue, I've re-worded the language so the problem no longer exists, and found other references as well.  Finally, you have failed to discuss your continued attempts to insert a nearly anonymous opinion piece that deals mostly with other topics in a non-contested area of the article. Jayjg (talk)  17:22, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * Ummm, wrongo. Ignited and sparked are 'not' identical in meaning to started.  "A started B" implies that A is the primary cause of B.  "A ignited or sparked B" implies that A was among many causes of B, and probably some other cause C was the primary cause.  There is a clear difference in 'substance' here, not just in verbiage.  --Kasreyn

Why do you believe "ignited" and "sparked" is inflammatory language? "Started" suggests that it was Sharon's visit alone that was the cause of the intifada. Most Palestinian sources that deal with Sharon's visit to Temple Mount explains that the climate was ripe for a second intifada and that Sharon's provocation was the event that sparked it. As for the second issue, your use of selective quoting to prove that the Palestinians started the intifada is not good. Neither are they relevant to this article which deals with Sharon, not the Al-Aqsa intifada. Better would be if you would like to provide a source for this sentence "Israel claimed instead that the Al-Aqsa Intifada was engineered by Arafat as a leverage tool." And you have to clarify which "nearly anonymous opinion piece" which I have attempted to insert. Palestine-info 18:59, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC)


 * My google search found that "sparked" was by far the most commonly used term, and "ignited" the least commonly used term. I've changed it to "sparked".  Regarding your second objection, I've re-worded and brought sources for all claims.  Regarding the third, you keep trying to insert a link to an off-topic and nearly anonymous opinion piece. I don't have to tell you which one, since you keep inserting it. Please do not use the Talk: pages to play games. Jayjg (talk)  19:33, 28 Jan 2005 (UTC)

Disengagement Plan Quotation
It is also saddening to see a bias author who continues to remove the part that quoted Sharon's top aid saying the purpose of disangagement was to destroy Palestinian aspirations for years to come. There is no need to protect Sharon that he is, or is not a war criminal. If the reader hates Palestinians or is "anti-semetic" against Arab's, it is clear that Sharon, being the Butcher of Beirut is a great man- a hero! But if you are sympathetic to little girls and boys being murdered at the hands of this piece of pork you will have pleasure reading that there is an honest voice. Eternalsleeper
 * This article is about Sharon, not the disengagement plan. You comments, if they can be verified with a reliable source, belong in the article about the disengagement plan. Jayjg (talk)  15:21, 11 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * I've studied the quotation and the source, and considering the source of the comments, it seems a very valid discussion of Sharon's policies and motives. That is not to say, however, that a separate article on the Disengagement Plan should not be pursued. In any case, I expanded the quotation an dated it, and moved it to the latter part of the career section to address concerns relevancy and flow. --A. S. A. 15:41, Feb 12, 2005 (UTC)


 * It belongs in an article about the Disengagement Plan, not a biography of Sharon; if Sharon said this it would belong here. It was certainly not relevant where it was placed. Jayjg (talk)  03:39, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * The Disengagement Plan is a major policy brainchild of Sharon's, and such insightful comments from such a top aide are extremely pertinent to criticism and and analysis of Sharone's peacemaking activities, and therefore most certainly belong in his biography. Furthermore the quotation is meticulously dated, sourced and hyper-linked. I don't see how anyone opposing the inclusion of this material would have a leg to stand on, should it end up in dispute resolution. It's so strikingly relevant!--A. S. A. 10:59, Feb 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * There are all sorts of objections to and suspicions of the Disengagement Plan, and they are outlined in the lengthy article on the topic, Israel's unilateral disengagement plan of 2004. I've moved the relevant information about the plan into that article, where it is indeed strikingly relevant.  I've also cleaned up some of the mis-spellings, and put in some of the missing hyperlinks. Jayjg (talk)  15:44, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The quote is pertinent because it mirrors what quite a lot of people around the world thinks about Sharon's "disengagement plan." Palestine-info 16:25, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * How do you know that? Anyway, it's pertinent in the article on the plan, not the article on Sharon. Jayjg (talk)  16:32, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * You cannot delete this instance of legitimate analysis of Sharon's motives and policies just because there is a separate article on the Disengagement plan. The mention of the Plan in the Sharon biography is brief and only extends insofar as showing reasons for distrust of his perceived double-dealing and an analysis of his motives. It's great to link to the plan, which I have maintained, but to cut out his aid's quotation, which so clearly corroborates his critics' concerns regarding motivation and double dealing, is unjustified.--A. S. A. 16:49, Feb 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * There are all sorts of legitimate quotes, both for and against this plan, and lots of other commentary as well, which is why it was included in a sub-article detailing this information. The reason for having sub-articles is to avoid the bloat in other articles.  This is a biography of Sharon, not an in depth analysis of his plan, nor of what his various aides or political allies and foes said about it.  Including one particular negative view of the plan in this article, while putting all other views (both positive and negative) in a sub-article, is biased and unjustified. Jayjg (talk)  16:57, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * It is a brief mention, which adequately crystalizes one of the most repeated Arab criticisms of Sharon, that of double dealing and actively trying to hinder a Palestinian State, and in no way encumbers the article with an off-topic "in depth analysis." Furthermore, the reference is an analysis of Sharon and his motives, not a biased negative-only view of the Disengagement Plan itself. By all means if you think there is another positive way of looking at this quotation, include it. Your wholesale deletion is unwarranted. If we simply cannot agree on this point, I will begin Dispute Resolution, and start to limit my reverts to once daily, except for minor wiki corrections and additions--A. S. A. 17:14, Feb 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * The quote is about his aide's view of the plan, not Sharon's, and it only provides one particular (negative) view of the plan (which you claim is the "most repeated Arab criticism of Sharon"), not the full range of positive and negative views (of which there are many). I've already begun Dispute Resolution, by putting our debate up for RfC.  You'll find my request for help at WP:RfC. Jayjg (talk)  17:19, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * We have reached an impasse. My position is explained above. I will now revert only once daily until the outcome. Post Script: I failed to find any other spelling and links errors that you mentioned in the edit summary, please specify them for me, thanks.--A. S. A. 17:26, Feb 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * Thanks, but I prefer to leave them in there as an example of the dangers of blind reverts. Jayjg (talk) 17:54, 13 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * That's extraordinary. And most unfortunate. Wikipedians are supposed to collaborate on improving all aspects of an article. That you should respond thus to an honest and polite request for assistance is very disappointing. What's more, since I asked for your help with correcting errors that you are fond of mentioning (without being specific), proves I am not engaging in blind reverts.--A. S. A. 19:47, Feb 14, 2005 (UTC)


 * Don't worry, my next edit will fix all the problems. Jayjg (talk) 19:49, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * I look forward to reading it.--A. S. A. 20:17, Feb 14, 2005 (UTC)

I'm happy with Jayjg's edit, for the most part. I don't mind if the actual quotation is removed, since the paraphrased meaning is briefly mentioned, as well as the implied criticism of motives and such. I did have one proviso I wanted to include, however. For the uninitiated, reading "he has embarked an a risky course of unilateral withdrawal from the Gaza Strip" might sound as if full control of the territory would devolve to the Palestinians, with sovereignty etc. I propose to add "while maintaining control of its borders and airspace, and reserving the option of military incursions" or a something similarly brief, to clarify the fact that Israel would still hold the territory, despite pulling out settlers and a full military garrison, until a final settlement is reached with the Palestinians. To prevent escalations of reverts of a controversial paragraph, I thought we could discuss it first before I added the sentence. Opinions?


 * "while maintaining control of its borders and airspace," should be enough; military incursion is an option for any country at any time. Jayjg (talk) 21:18, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Very well, since there were no other opinions, I went ahead and reworded the paragraph moderately. In addition to adding the borders and airspace proviso, I also decided that since the right wing's "security, military and religious grounds" of objection to the Plan were mentioned, I balanced that with the reasons why the other side supported the Plan, as a step towards ending the occupation and a final peace.--A. S. A. 13:52, Feb 15, 2005 (UTC)


 * "all Palestinian territories" is inaccurate on any number of grounds, and pre-decides the outcome of any future peace process. I've re-worded for NPOV and accuracy. Jayjg (talk)  19:21, 15 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Good edit, Aladdin. Jayjg (talk) 20:55, 15 Feb 2005 (UTC)

"large segments of the Israeli public"
Palestine-info, why do you think the disengagement plan is opposed by "large segments of the Israeli public"? Which segments are these, and how large are they? Jayjg (talk) 16:04, 16 Feb 2005 (UTC)

These segments are liberal and conservative-leaning Jewish citizens of Israel. How many they are, I don't know but they are loud and arranges lots of demonstrations. Polls conducted show that they are very many. And they can't all be "right-wing." Palestine-info 04:27, 17 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * Please bring evidence for your claims. Jayjg (talk) 14:46, 17 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Although this requires more research for a definitive assessment of the relative sizes of the pro and con camps (of the Disengagement), the impression I got from international news coverage was that a moderate majority of Israelis support the withdrawal, and settler activists and their sympathizers have been leading the opposition. While vocal, I would not call them a majority. I have no polls to cite; as I said it requires more research to say definitively. I suggest that for the contested phrase, polls and/or noteworthy news sources be found, cited and incorporated into the article.--A. S. A. 20:19, Feb 17, 2005 (UTC)
 * "Support for the Gaza disengagement plan remains broad at 59%." "A solid majority of the Israeli public - and among Likud voters - supports Prime Minister Ariel Sharon's disengagement plan to withdraw from the Gaza Strip, according to a Haaretz poll conducted by Dialog under the supervision of Chamille Fuchs. Some 61 percent expressed support for the plan even after the death of Palestinian Chairman Yasser Arafat."  "According to the latest opinion polls published by Israeli newspapers, the majority of Israeli citizens support the disengagement plan, 66% in an Ha'aretz poll published in July, 58% in a Yediot Aharonot poll published in mid September."  Jayjg (talk)  20:44, 17 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Seems solid to me, and in line with what I recall of international news commentary. Palestine-info, I hope in light of this, you will concede this point.--A. S. A. 21:08, Feb 17, 2005 (UTC)

These are roughly the numbers I've read too. It means that 30-40% opposes the plan. That is a "large segment of the Israeli public." Palestine-info 03:37, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Well you won't be factually incorrect if you say 30-40% oppose, and reference the above polls and stats. It's sounds better than "large segments of the Israeli public" which might suggest a majority. My concern is for brevity and flow.--A. S. A. 07:01, Feb 19, 2005 (UTC)


 * Actually, one can't assume that 30-40% oppose the plan; it all depends on what percentage say "don't know" or refuse to answer. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 02:56, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

The articles citing the polls are very biased and they do not even mention what question was asked. Neither do they mention if their statistics include the "don't know" category. You get more clues that tell you that the support can't be overwhelming when you read about 150,000+ demonstrations against it. Or that "49% view the threat of a civil war in Israel ensuing from the plan’s implementation as high" [ http://www.jewishtoronto.net/content_display.html?ArticleID=142079] Or "50% for disengagement plan". Knowing all this, I think we can assume that the plan does not have an absolute majority behind it and that something like 25-50% of the Israeli population opposes it. And as I said, they can't all be right-wing. Palestine-info 11:31, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * No, we can't really assume anything, and especially not based on your understanding of the situation, when your edits are consistently and inevitably only for the purpose of Palestinian advocacy. Also, you keep forgetting that you should propose changes in Talk: first before trying to bully them into the article.  And finally, you keep forgetting that this is a biography of Sharon, not a discussion of the disengagement plan; the nuances of the plan should be discussed in the article on the topic. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  15:37, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

And you should not forget that the purpouse of this talk page is to discuss changes to an article named "Ariel Sharon," not to discuss my persona. You are right that the nuances of the plan should be discussed in the article on that topic, but that doesn't mean that the information presented in this article should be faulty. Palestine-info 20:53, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * And you should not forget the the purpose of this Talk: page is to get consensus for the changes you wish to make, rather than trying to force them on the page. The information presented here is correct, and you are yet again trying to turn a biography into something else.  Please remember this is a biography of Sharon, not a discussion of the disengagement plan.  As it is the paragraph is too long. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  23:29, 20 Feb 2005 (UTC)

It seems like your criticism has changed from "cite your sources" then "you are incorrect" to now "the paragraph is to verbose." The text listed what different groups thinks about Sharon's disengagement plan, but omits what Israeli citizens think about the plan which is arguably the most important group in question. I believe we are close to a consensus, but I'll wait to hear what A.S.A thinks. Palestine-info 06:48, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * All three objections have been used, and all three are still valid. You have never cited any sources, you are incorrect, and the paragraph is already too verbose, and you keep trying to make that worse.  As for what Israeli citizens think of the plan, please recall (as I keep reminding you) that this is a biography of Sharon, not a detailed discussion of the plan itself. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  14:55, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, there are a plethora of right-wing parties in the Kenesset that do not support the Disengagement. In my opinion, we ought to mention only the prime minister's own party's bitter opposition (since this is his biography) and leave out "other MK's", which after all come under "right wing Israelis." As for the following contested sentence: "The Israeli public is currently divided on the question of disengagement with the part favouring disengagement having a slight lead over those that opposes it. Call have been made both from within the knesset and from grassroot organisations to hold a national referendum over this question which they feel is very important to the future of Israel." My vote would be to drop it. Besides it being grammatically cumbersome, I believe it delves too much into the nuances of the Disengagement Plan without being directly pertinent to the Sharon biography. I did some trimming to shorten the paragraph as well. Mentioning George Bush and Javier Solana seems verbose, I shortened it to the US and EU. I also reverted anon user 69.86.1.73's change of "involvement in" to "found indirectly respoponsible for" because the section on Sabra and Shatila is self-contained and the change, especially in quotation marks, is confusing. Palestine-info, if it were not for you, there would be no mention of the Dov Weisglass controversy at all. It is an invaluable measure of Sharon's alleged secret motives. Nevertheless, I am grateful that through compromise and consensus, it was trimmed down and the full details transferred to the Disengagement article. Perhaps you can look at this analysis of the Israeli public opposition in the same light. Let's keep it trim here in the Sharon Biography and move deeper analysis to the sub-article.--A. S. A. 07:25, Feb 21, 2005 (UTC)


 * I am in general agreement with AlladinSE's latest changes (even though he has reverted some of my changes as well). As I've repeated in a number of commments, this biography of Sharon is too verbose as it is, focussing too much on details which are already better covered in other articles.  AlladinSE is also correct that though there are a number of parties opposing the plan, they are all right-wing parties.  My only concern at this point is regarding the "bitter" opposition; I find these kinds of descriptors to be POV by their very nature.  As well, the latest opinion polls have 60% of Likud supporters supporting the plan, almost identical to the support levels for Israelis as a whole.  It is those to the right of Likud who oppose it at much higher percentages. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  14:55, 21 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * I do not agree that the use of the word is intrinsically POV. I watched the Likud party HQ meeting on TV when the Plan was being discussed. There were angry shouts and scuffles, and the PM was handed an embarrassing defeat from his own party. I would describe what happened as very bitter indeed. Nevertheless, I was unaware that a majority of Likud have shifted to favour the Plan. I understood that since the time they voted it down (and Sharon proceeded anyway) that a majority still opposed it. If support is now really at 60%, then I will drop my attachment to the "bitter" adjective, or propose a change a long the lines of "However, it has been greeted, at least initially, with bitter opposition from within his own Likud party."--A. S. A. 21:51, Feb 21, 2005 (UTC)
 * As of January 2005 "The broad support for the disengagement plan—59%—remains unchanged, and a segmentation of the rates of support and opposition by voting for the large parties also indicates great stability. The rates of support come to 89% among Labor voters, 84% for Shinui, 78% for Meretz (Yahad), and 60% for Likud, while the corresponding rate for Mafdal (the National Religious Party) is 20%, for Shas 7%, and for the National Union 0%." Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  15:43, 23 Feb 2005 (UTC)


 * ASA, before you make statements like they voted it down (and Sharon proceeded anyway) that a majority still opposed it, please try to learn what you are talking about, Sharon didn't just "proceed anyways", he presented a modified method, then the knesset voted again which passed.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 02:10, 19 December 2005 (UTC)

Quotes Section
Why have the quotations been removed and only the Wikiquote link preserved? From what I have read on Wikipedia, most articles with quotations keep them after they have been teranswikified, and place the wikiquote template in the quotations section. I wish to return the quotations section to the article and maintain the wikiquote link. Is this forbidden by Wikipedia? Please advise.--A. S. A. 23:02, Feb 23, 2005 (UTC)
 * My understanding is that general quotations should all be transwikied to Wikiquotes. Quotations which are actually used in the body of the article should be maintained in the article itself.  Wikiquotes is a sister project of Wikipedia set up to hold quotes, there is no point in duplicating the information in both places when Wikipedia has a specific repository for it.  Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  15:48, 24 Feb 2005 (UTC)
 * A pity. A contiguous article with a Quotes section rather than a link appears more seemly somehow. Oh well. If this policy is to be uniform, there's a great many articles in Wikipedia in need of this surgery. --A. S. A. 00:25, Feb 25, 2005 (UTC)
 * Yes. I've done a couple, and hope to do one or two articles a week.  In practice I've usually seen it done more often when an article is quite large, as an easy fix to bring the size down, but I've seen it done for small articles as well. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  14:35, 25 Feb 2005 (UTC)

Totally Disputed and why
I have been reviewing the articles of controversial political figures on Wikipedia and have seen some excellent work that fulfills Wikipedia's neutrality objective. This article is not one of them.

Calling the Prime Minister of Israel "the butcher of Beirut" is more English tabloid than American encyclopedia, can we have a middle east expert without bias (OK, maybe that's a tall order) have a look at the Sharon article. It is quite outrageous in places.

Lagavulin 23:53, 12 Apr 2005 (UTC)


 * I for one would not oppose the removal of that reference unless whomever wanted to retain it provided a source. I'll google it now and see if there are any matches. If not, I'll remove the reference and the tag. If there is a source, I'll add it and remove the tag. At any rate, thanks Lagavulin for sharing your concerns in Talk. Too many editors seem content to just leave those tags without any effort to reach consensus. --AladdinSE 00:16, Apr 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * Thanks, I guess my concern is that it is possible to ascribe horrible nicknames to any prominent figure. And saying "some say" or "it is alleged" or whatever doesn't really change the fact that it is unencyclopedic. I personally believe what happened in Lebanon in 1982 or whenever was disgraceful and unjustified but it doesn't mean I should be able to label him a butcher in an aricle required to be neutral. Lagavulin 00:20, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I just added two sources, (and removed the tag) and I think you'll agree that they're big wigs. The BBC and the New Yorker Magazine. But you're partially right you know, it does seem to have a British tabloid feel to it, one of the links that came up was the Daily Mirror! Not to mention a whole lot of highly partisan blogs. But I think the epithet is referenced by enough reputable sources to allow it to stand the way it is, i.e. clearly stating that he is a controversial figure, and has been and is called this by the whole Arab world and then some. Do you think this is sufficient, or are you of a mind to introduce an RFC on the matter? --AladdinSE 00:35, Apr 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * Saying there are sources to describe him as a "butcher" does not cut it, I'm sorry. I don't care if his wife called him the Butcher of Beirut. It doesn't mean anything. It's just an emotive label used by political opponents. If you do a Google search on "miserable failure" you will come up with George W Bush. Now I find that very funny as it happens but does it mean it's legitimate to assert Bush is a "miserable failure"? No. It's just some crafty bloggers and a valueless opinion. I couldn't imagine a less encyclopedic entry than this whole article. So please don't remove the tag, there are serious factual errors and major bias going on here. Not sure what a RFC is but if it can bring in neutral writers that would be great. Lagavulin 00:38, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC)
 * I have to disagree on general principal. If a nickname is prominent enough (and I can't say whether or not this one in particular is) then it should be included.  See Josef Mengele (Angel of Death), Kenneth Bianchi (Hillside Strangler), Huda Salih Mahdi Ammash (Mrs. Anthrax) all clearly unflattering names, but also clearly relevant in their articles.  --CVaneg 03:01, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC)

I'm surprised you returned the tag despite the sources. Remember, the article is not labeling him this way, only reporting that the epithet is widely used, and by whom, with sources. Also, your parallel to Bush does not apply. The Butcher of Beirut derived out of severe and specified battles and massacres. This is not to say that he is guilty beyond doubt, but the phrase is certainly an indication of one POV, which is presented alongside the opposing POV, that of the war hero. That's the Wikipedia NPOV way, present both sides. I will not remove the tag as long as fresh ideas are being discussed. As for the RFC, I wiki linked it earlier so you can read about it if you are unfamiliar. Also, please list all your concerns besides this one, but please read all the earlier Talk discussions, as much of your concerns might have already been thrashed out previously. You may find you agree with the consensus. --AladdinSE 00:50, Apr 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * Sorry didn't mean to surprise. I understand the source of the term. I reject its use in any form in an encyclopedia article that aspires above all else to be neutral. And you know he probably was guilty of what happened in Lebanon but that doesn't justify the use of such emotive terms. I understand and welcome your comments about having both POV's but the viewpoint asserting Sharon did the wrong thing in Lebanon can be put much less emotively than calling him a "butcher." Will read up on the RFC thing and will start writing a (lengthy) list of the issues with this article. Thanks for dealing with me patiently. Lagavulin 01:02, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC)

Lagavulin, I think I understand your concern, but it is entirely misdirected here. The article does not call Sharon the “Butcher of Beirut,” it merely reports that he is called that by a wide swath of critics and detractors, specifically in a controversial and non-universal sense. We can no more censor this information than we can remove all reference to "Ivan the Terrible" from the article about Tsar Ivan IV of Russia. CVaneg's examples above are also good examples. I look forward to your list, and I hope you compile it after you read previous Talk sections because they dealt extensively with issues of NPOV. If it takes a long time to compile, I hope you will not insist on the Tag while we wait for it. --AladdinSE 03:29, Apr 13, 2005 (UTC)


 * The whole reason this un-encyclopedic insult is in the article is because User:Alberuni kept trying to find epithets to described Sharon. He started with "terrorist", and after a number of battles was finally able to push "Butcher of Beirut" into the article. As I've pointed out earlier, these labels are silly and subjective; if we're going for "Butcher of" designations then we should add all of them to Wikipedia.  We would have to describe King Léopold II as the "The Butcher of Congo"  and Sani Abacha as "The Butcher of Lagos"  and Hosni Mubarak as "The Butcher of Cairo"  and Hafez al-Assad as "The Butcher of Damascus"  and Idi Amin as "The Butcher of Uganda"  and Shamil Basayev as "The Butcher of Beslan"  etc.  And then there's Tommy Franks as "The Butcher of Basra"   - oops, there's a conflict there, Norman Schwarzkopf is also "The Butcher of Basra" .  Can two people be the Butcher of one place?  Of course, we'd have a bit of a problem with Sharon too, as "The Butcher of Beirut" is also "The Butcher of Sabra and Chatila"  - can you be a double "The Butcher of"?  And what a mess we have with Slobodan Milosevic - is he "The Butcher of the Balkans"   or is it "The Butcher of Belgrade" ?  But not only is Milosevic a double "The Butcher of", but apparently Wesley Clark is the real "The Butcher of Belgrade", and Ante Pavelic is the real "The Butcher of the Balkans" - or is it Bill Clinton ? And of course George Bush Sr. is the "Butcher of Beirut"! , as is Saddam Hussein .  For people who are primarily (and more famously known) for specific deeds (e.g. Hillside Strangler), these kinds of epithets make sense.  For well-known political leaders with a list of activities stretching back decades, they do not. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  19:02, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC)

You are very funny Jayjg but make a serious point. Butcher may be justified in loose chitchat but it isn't acceptable in any encyclopedia article. As questionable as Sharon's role in Lebanon was and it is appropriate to record what happened in Lebanon and Sharon's role in it, it is not necessary to tag him butcher or bastard or barbarian or whatever else would spring to mind if we were talking about it over my favorite drink.

Can someone delete this, I find much more in the article that is equally unencyclopedic. Sharon is obviously terribly controversial but pouring unmeasured scorn on him makes a real and critical (in its true sense) evaluation of him in the article impossible. Wikipedia - as I have said a few times - is growing in stature all the time. Let's accept the responsibility that imposes and get rid of the hyperbole and hatred even from contentious articles such as this one. Lagavulin 20:52, 13 Apr 2005 (UTC) PS I'm still working on the list of problems for you to consider.


 * Jayjg, you can mention all those epithets in all of those articles if the term is used by a significant number of people and reported as such by a significant number of Media. As long as, like this article, it is clear that we are only reporting what is said and not the article itself that is describing them thus. This article mentioned the usage of the phrase while specifically denoting it's controversial nature. The invasion of Lebanon and the Sabra and Shitila massacres were bloody affairs, it's not a stretch that an emotive phrase like that will develop from the other side. The reference is sourced and presented neutrally, so unless somebody has something new to add not already covered in Talk, my inclination is to move on. This was the result of consensus after all, and much improved over what was originally proposed, as we can see by Jayjg's account. --AladdinSE 03:57, Apr 14, 2005 (UTC)

Aladdin, I'm sorry but just because you can find a signifigant group of people that refer to someone using a epitat does not mean it should be in the encyclopedia. Why don't we refer to Sharon as a "Kyke", I could probably find quite a bit of literature and references that people indeed do refer to him as a kyke. No matter what info you provide that the epitat is not universal, it shopuild still not be there.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 02:19, 19 December 2005 (UTC)


 * FYI, that would be "epithet". ;)  -Kasreyn


 * Thanks, I recently have become a very poor speller


 * Quote "Calling the Prime Minister of Israel "the butcher of Beirut" is more English tabloid than American encyclopedia". Since when the hell has Wikipedia been an american anything!?!? It is an international encyclopedia. That means those funny little places off the coast of the us (which comprise 99.999% of the world) get to have a say too!!! By the way, I'm not having a go at all americans here....but honestly!!Jcuk 09:07, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Moshe, I just discovered these remarks, so many months after the above consensus was reached. I discovered them today after I noticed that the sourced remarks have been censored again. Please refer to my remarks above, but to specifically respond to your question as to why we don't refer to Sharon by the racial slur "Kyke", that is because it is a racial slur and you'll not find reliable sources that will ever reference such racist material. The "Butcher of Beirut" term however, as you can see, is sourced by the BBC and The New Yorker.--AladdinSE 10:45, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

More questions/problems with the article
Among others: --Delirium 09:55, Apr 13, 2005 (UTC)
 * What exactly was Sharon's political career prior to 1977? The first parts of the article claim he was a right-winger, joining Likud in 1973, while the section on politics claims he didn't join with Likud until 1977, and actually courted left-wing parties early on.  How to reconcile these?
 * Is there a reference for his dismissal in 1974? In particular, for it being due to his political views?
 * The end section strongly takes the viewpoint that Sharon is a right-winger withdrawing from Gaza as a political ploy. While this is a view people hold, it is definitely only one of two views&mdash;most Israeli right-wingers actually oppose his withdrawal plan, and some have even called him a traitor for it.  The article should reflect that better


 * All of these are excellent points, and can be attended to without the need for the tag. I would volunteer to research them myself but for the next week at least, it's all I can do to make time to keep track of the other articles and Talk discussions. If no one has done it by April 20th, I will start researching these important holes and discrepancies. --AladdinSE 04:08, Apr 14, 2005 (UTC)

Internet hoax quote
I've removed the internet hoax quote that Yuber inserted as a WP:POINT. The quote is actually taken from a fictional work In the Land of Israel by Amos Oz, and has been attributed on propaganda sites to Sharon. See  As well, inserting the hoax quote at the top of the article, as opposed to the bottom, where quotes normally goes, shows shocking bad faith. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 23:53, 13 May 2005 (UTC)
 * In the Land of Israel is not a fictional work, however this "quotation" is a fiction. Oz did not ever claim that Sharon said anything like that. --Zero 11:23, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I added a few more quotes, please tell me if I'm showing bad faith as I value what you think.Yuber(talk) 23:44, 14 May 2005 (UTC)
 * Of course you're acting in bad faith; you've gone to a particularly nasty site, and found a serious of dubious "quotes" from various senior Israelis figures intended to make them look bad. It's good evidence, though, thanks. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  04:14, 15 May 2005 (UTC)
 * Ah right, but when you add a dubious quote from Moshe Gil that is editing in "good faith". Your double-standards are amazing, since most of these quotes are from israeli/american sources.Yuber(talk) 04:16, 15 May 2005 (UTC)
 * I don't think you know what the phrase "double standard" means. Moshe Gil is a well-respected historion; the websites you've brought are crap.  As well, the first of the two quotes you added was another well-known hoax. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  04:17, 15 May 2005 (UTC)
 * Kos Yisrael radio is a hoax now?Yuber(talk) 04:19, 15 May 2005 (UTC)
 * If he had actually said it there, then no. But since he didn't, that makes it a hoax.  In fact, it was invented by a pro-Hamas organization:  Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  04:24, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

I've protected the page so that this hoax business can be sorted out without anyone being blocked for 3RR. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 06:26, May 15, 2005 (UTC)

The run and grab it one. Polly Toynbee quoted him in the Guardian. I think that's generally accepted as a "reputable source", isn't it? I couldn't find the original Guardian article but here it is reprinted on Common Dreams Grace Note 06:33, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

The Toynbee article Can you unprotect the page now please so that we can include this appropriately sourced quote? Grace Note 06:35, 15 May 2005 (UTC)


 * It's a real quote which is already found in Wikiquote, where it belongs, and which is linked to from here. That's what Wikiquote is for, a place to store those long lists of quotes which used to be found at the bottoms of articles. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  06:36, 15 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Yes, appropriately sourced, but inappropriately placed, as I made quite clear in my edit comments. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 06:37, 15 May 2005 (UTC)

Okay, so when this article is unprotected you will not mind that I put in a sentence in an appropriate place saying that Sharon has expressed a desire to grab as much land as possible, perhaps in the bit about how he has worked to wreck the peace process, and using this as my source? Grace Note 06:44, 15 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Please try to remember, this is a brief article outlining the man's entire life. And it hardly seems relevant now, since his policies have changed; rather, it seems like an attempt to push a POV. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  07:04, 15 May 2005 (UTC)
 * Do you have quotes that you can source appropriately that show that he has changed this position? The POV that I am "pushing" is that Sharon has supported a landgrab by the settlers, which is not consonant with the "roadmap" or any other approach to peace that involves Palestinian autonomy in the disputed territories. It's a key issue about Sharon, Jay. His position on the settlements is much discussed -- in connection both with the Gaza pullout and with the West Bank. I'm not suggesting we include our own analysis of it, of course, but I think that trying to exclude mention of his views on the settlements is a bit fishy. Grace Note 23:57, 15 May 2005 (UTC)
 * Um, the fact that he now supports removing all settlers from the Gaza Strip despite fierce opposition from within his own party would indicate that he no longer holds this position. The settler movement now considers him to be a traitor. If you feel the you need to promote his earlier views, you need to balance them with his current views. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  14:06, 16 May 2005 (UTC)


 * I don't think that his change of position over Gaza shows that he has changed his mind. It's just a tactical thing, Jay. I think it's reasonably clear that he feels that he can sacrifice Gaza to hang on to more of the West Bank and all of Jerusalem. He understands that by giving some he can paint the Palestinians as the incalcitrant party in negotiations. Hey, we gave them Gaza but they still won't give up their claim on Jerusalem. That kind of thing. But having said that (which I wouldn't want included unless it is sourced, of course, I don't expect my personal analysis of Sharon's motives to be any part of our article), I don't see why one wouldn't include that as a counterargument. If you can find him saying that he's changed his mind about grabbing land, you could include that. If you can find a reputable source who claims that Gaza represents a change of heart across the board, you could include that. The whole issue is certainly interesting. It poses a lot of questions that are not simply answered. It certainly shouldn't be ignored though, and that particular quote is taken to be indicative of Sharon's general attitude to the settlers, who he has generally encouraged, I think you'd have to agree. Grace Note 04:04, 17 May 2005 (UTC)
 * Well, your political analysis is interesting; I personally think he is trying to make peace. In any event, it's not that relevant. You may also believe that he still supports the settlers, but they certainly don't any more.  In fact, they believe the opposite, and have for a couple of years:   Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  18:35, 17 May 2005 (UTC)


 * kof. . It's not my analysis, Jay. "However, Mr Sharon regards the annexation of Maale Adumim as Israel’s reward for pulling out of the Gaza Strip — and he also wants other blocs, such as Gush Etzion and Ariel. Each holds more Jewish settlers than the Gaza outposts put together."  "The settlement blocs, however, "will be a part of the State of Israel, territorially connected to Israel, and with a much larger population than there is today."" It seems Mr Sharon shares my view of his ideas. Grace Note 00:08, 18 May 2005 (UTC)


 * No, this is your political analysis He understands that by giving some he can paint the Palestinians as the incalcitrant party in negotiations. Hey, we gave them Gaza but they still won't give up their claim on Jerusalem. That kind of thing. And negotiation always involves give and take, there's nothing nefarious about that; did you imagine it would just be all give by one side? Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  01:37, 18 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, of course I don't, Jay. The Palestinians have already given 78% of what they claimed. Gaza is not much to gain for surrendering any hope of a contiguous, viable state. Grace Note 04:12, 18 May 2005 (UTC)
 * How would giving up Maale Adumim and other Jerusalem suburbs mean "surrendering any hope of a contiguous, viable state"? Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 17:33, 18 May 2005 (UTC)

Grace Note, I believe it is factually imprecise that the Palestinians do not have any claims for the sovereign territories of Israel. These claims and Israeli demands in the West Bank are still under negotiation and are in fact, next to Jerusalem, probably the toughest issues. It is very early to discuss what an Arab Palestinian state will look like, if and mostly when established. Also, this is not so much the place for such discussions, but rather the place to discuss Ariel Sharon. I understand and share your concerns. The situation is rather worrisome for all people in the area and beyond. gidonb 18:15, 18 May 2005 (UTC)

Removal of quotes

 * The removal of quotes by Jayjg is disturbing. He has done this to every Israeli politician article I have added quotes to, and has called it "vandalism" even when it comes out of Israeli/American sources.  Maybe he should try to accept that Israeli politicians aren't perfect angels and that they do say some offensive things.  Thank God for secular Jews/leftist and moderate Israelis, or else any quote I would cite from an Arab source would be considered a hoax or a "hate site".Yuber(talk) 13:38, 15 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Actually, it was your addition that was disturbing, and you have confused me with other editors; when you made this comment I certainly had not removed the quotes from "every Israeli politician article I have added quotes to". My initial objections to your quotes included the fact that they were known hoaxes, or were duplicates in articles which already linke to Wikiquote.  Those objections remain, and are compounded by the fact that you have taken them all from a single webpage which contains known hoax quotes, thus making them all dubious unless confirmed from more reliable sources. Jayjg <sup style="color:darkgreen;">(talk)  14:06, 16 May 2005 (UTC)

Unrelated note not worthy of a separate section
(Unrelated note not worthy of a separate section in this discussion: regarding my today's edit, I didn't intend to do a drastic change. I guess I had an older version in the cache...)  ←Humus sapiens←Talk 08:30, 15 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Don't worry, Humus. When the article is unprotected, perhaps you could make your change first? Grace Note 23:57, 15 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Thanks, Grace Note. Nothing to worry about, that edit probably went unnoticed since it happened in the middle of the RV war. For the first time I see a benefit of RV war...  ←Humus sapiens←Talk 04:57, 16 May 2005 (UTC)


 * Yuber has been blocked for 24 hours for violating 3RR elsewhere, and there's probably no need to keep the page protected in his absence, so I've unprotected. I'll keep it on my watchlist in case it starts up again when he returns. SlimVirgin <sup style="color:purple;">(talk) 10:53, May 16, 2005 (UTC)

- - - What Sharon has done here in August of 2005 is a step towards peace, at least on the part of Israel. Hopefully the Arabs will utilize this gesture. - - - It isn't israeli land...thats why they call it the occupied territories

Clarification on his son's death
Article currently says "Gur died in October 1967 after being shot while playing with his father's rifle". My assumption is that the rifle discharged whilst he was playing with it, the shot killing him. However, it's also possible to interpret the sentence in other ways, eg: someone shot the child taking Gur to be armed and, therefore, some kind of threat. I don't know the circumstances. Perhaps someone who does could clarify the article? --bodnotbod 21:15, 24 October 2005 (UTC)
 * I've clarified it. Gur Sharon and a friend were playing with Ariel Sharon's gun when the friend accidentally shot Gur.  OCNative 03:24, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Resignation From Likud Party
I have reverted the edit by User:81.245.130.33 To Last Edit By User:Brendanconway because Prime Minister Sharon has not official resigned from the Likud Party. According to the BBC and other media outlets an official announcement is forth coming on Monday 20 November 2005 until then the fact that he is the head of the Likud should not be changed. Misterrick 00:10, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

Protection
I hope I did not just violate a rule. When I came upon the Ariel Sharon article, it consisted of a single word, the famous four-letter Anglo-Saxon dirty word. (Literary reference, "A Christmas Story": "Only I did't say 'fudge.'  I said THE word.")  In looking at the history, this vandalistic act had been the most recent edit. The edit before that was the placement of a "protection" tag, which obviously did not protect the page from the vandal. (I have not yet figured out whether "protected" pages are actually physically protected, or if it is "just" a rule that you are not supposed to edit a protected page.) However, in looking at the version where the page had been "protected," there had also been some edits made that substituted the "/" symbol for a number of other characters. I could not figure out whether that was a good or a bad thing but it sure did not look correct to me. Therefore when I reverted the f-word, I went back to the edit before THAT -- which means in effect that I removed the "protection" tag. If I have done something incorrect, someone please fix it because I do not know how. My only intention was to get the article back to the last fully intact version. 6SJ7 14:59, 21 November 2005 (UTC)

Infobox
I added the little "president" infobox to the article, I hope no one minds. If there is a reason why it shouldn't belong here please tell me. I find it strange that most (all?) of the former Prime Ministers of Israel are missing the infobox.

A couple of things:

- under political party I put "Likud, Kadima". I don't know if this is the best way to go about it. You decide.

- I left spouse blank. Should I have instead put his wife along with the date of birth and death?

- Under place of birth I entered "Kfar Malal, Palestine (pre-state Israel)". Again, I'm not sure if that is the best way to say it (maybe it should be "Kfar Malal, British Mandate of Palestine"), you can decide. Pyro19 23:03, 27 November 2005 (UTC)

Cleanup
I added a cleanup tag because this article needs some work. What I mean is that the way this article has been written, it acts like Sharon's recent strokes are the biggest events in his life. They're not. He has done a lot more then become prime minister and die, and yet this article dedicates waaaayyyyyy too much room to his strokes. pielover87 07:32, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

Hi. I keep making grammatical corrections in this article, and I see that they keep disappearing. To all of you out there, I am a professional writer, and my knowledge of American-style English is virtually perfect (Wikipedia was started in America, and there are more native speakers of American-style English than British-style English, as funny as that sounds and with all due respect to the motherland of the English language, so I feel that spelling and placement of punctuation in relation to quotation marks should reflect the American style, especially since most of the spelling and quotation-mark-related punctuation placement in the article already are in the American style - let's be consistent). So please don't add a comma or delete a hyphen, for instance, in my revisions. Thank you. By the way, my mother grew up a few miles from Sharon's ranch, and Sharon and his sons have friends from my mother's community. Additionally, I've read Sharon's autobiography. So if you see me adding a minor fact about his life, please don't delete it unless you have read his autobiography and have interviewed his friends from my mother's kibbutz a few miles down the road from his Sycamore Farm and have found out then that I have erred. I don't see myself as better than any of you - I just happen to have access to some knowledge about Sharon's life that many of you happen to not have because my mother was born in a certain place. Thank you again.66.214.230.155 19:06, 6 January 2006 (UTC)66.214.230.155


 * Hi to you. I agree wholeheartedly with your comments. With all due respect, it is my experience, that people on Wikipedia tend to accord other users and Wiki editors more respect if they are registered users.  I notice that you are not a registered user. I had the same experience as you until  I registered.  Perhaps you are registered and just didn't use your registered name for the above comment?  Registering is easy, free and non-invasive.  Also, you might follow the directions at the top of the page and add your new Talk comments to the bottom of the page to keep folks happy.  Crunch 22:39, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I don't think there should be any standard dialect for articles, just keep it consistent! 85.138.88.136 04:14, 11 August 2006 (UTC)

As to your arrogant claims to near perfection, and the bit that says "especially since most of the spelling and quotation-mark-related punctuation placement in the article already are in the American style" ('placement' is in the singular, oh perfect one, whilst 'are' tends to indicate the plural), that's quite misleading. You would be right had you written 'the Chicago style manual', but that's not the same as 'American style'. I know professional American writers who reject the Chicago convention of placing a comma before the closing quotation mark where it is not part of the quoted name or phrase, as being silly, illogical and ungrammatical. And we don't need arrogant digs at speakers of British English, thanks all the same. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.142.51.19 (talk) 13:50, 3 February 2008 (UTC)

Current Event??
Does this article really need a current event tag? IMO, Ariel Sharon is not a current event, however Israeli-Palestinian_Conflict may be. If nobody has any objections, I will remove the Current Event tag around this time tomorrow. -Werdna648T/C\@ 03:56, 3 December 2005 (UTC)

I think the current event really referred to the Kadima party, before that article existed. In any case, thank you for taking off the tag! gidonb 12:07, 5 December 2005 (UTC)

Somewhat Impressed Overall
I am somewhat impressed overall of the portrayal of Ariel Sharon in his actions and policies. The continued debate over what is and is not pertinent in this biography is at the forefront of why I am impressed. I am pleased that people continue to place negative and positive aspects, for to have only of one side is POV. However, I must contend the placement of media views. It is a widely known fact that every news agency is known to twist information to their perspective, especially mainstream media such as the BBC and the New York Times. Largely, I have found the most major cases at this site. While not anti-Israel, it is at the very least anti-media bias against Israel, such as the case in this news report on the supposed Israeli soldier attack on a Palestinian here,. As noted in the article, an Israeli soldier is said to be shown attacking a Palestinian youth; however, the case is quite the opposite as he is trying to protect an ISRAELI youth from a mob of Palestinians. This is a cause to question the information in every news report, both pro- and anti-Israeli, as media can not only twist information, but blatantly lie about it as well.

In no regards am I anti-Palestinian, in fact I am both pro-Israeli and pro-Palestinian. I feel that the only method that could possibly be attainable for the peace of a single state would be the combination of Israel and Palestine into one single nation, with equal rights given to EVERY citizen. I will explain why at a later posting under Israel, as I have not the time at the moment.--Antibias 08:55, 5 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Thank you for your positive comments. If you can improve the article after reading the guidelines for users, you are welcome to give it a try. As for your promise to explain your views on the Palestinian-Israeli conflict when you find time - don't bother as we are not a discussion forum. Best regards, gidonb 12:12, 5 December 2005 (UTC)

VANDALISM!
As you can see, there is vandalism on this page. I can't revert the page because I am not an admin. Somebody needs to revert this NOW! Newguineafan 21:58, 21 December 2005 (UTC)

Never mind, I reverted it. Can someone help me with the copyright status, though? Newguineafan 22:16, 21 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Er, from the article history it was you who vandalised the article. At least, it was your diff that changed the image. If it was you, don't do it again. Hedley 23:37, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
 * Vandalism corrected, and I eventually replaced the picture with one that is a free license. Newguineafan, what you need to do is press the revert key ONCE then press the F5 key, and that will refresh your cache that will show the new photo. Zach (Sound Off) 23:47, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
 * BTW, if you think we could get this photo under a free license, this should be a good idea, IMHO. Zach (Sound Off) 23:56, 21 December 2005 (UTC)
 * I'll email them to see what the deal is with the image. I'll report back if and when I get a response. - Pyro19 04:08, 28 December 2005 (UTC)
 * GOOD NEWS: We have kindly been given permission to use the image. The source must be cited! I'll add it to the article right now.
 * Damn, I just noticed that we aren't allowed to use images with permission anymore. That's too bad, it's an excellent image. - Pyro19 04:22, 29 December 2005 (UTC)

Health issues
I have not figured out exactly where and how this should be included in the article (there is a paragraph on his health at the end of the intro and there is a separate section, "Stroke"), and I am still awaiting a source that is clearly reliable, so I am leaving the article alone for now. However, I have been hearing radio news reports for days that Sharon's medical condition is a bit more complicated than a "minor stroke." This was further confirmed this morning when I heard that he will be having a "procedure" on his heart. Now I have found this article [] which confirms that he will undergo catheterization to repair "a small hole in his heart"; that the stroke was not "minor"; and that some in Israel (at least, his political opponents) have questioned the accuracy of the medical reports and appear to have doubts that he is making decisions on his own. The latter statements must be taken very cautiously because they are obviously an attempt to influence the upcoming election, but at the same time it may turn out that the doubts about Sharon's fitness to continue as Prime Minister are valid. Someone may wish to edit the article based on this information, but at the very least, it bears watching. 6SJ7 16:53, 26 December 2005 (UTC)


 * Well, someone has now added some medical information, including the upcoming operation, but it is so much in medical-ese that I am not sure a general readership can be expected to understand it, but for the same reason I am not sure how to edit it into plain English and still retain the gist of it. Even so, the new information does not mention that the operation will be a "catheterization," which I think would at least have some meaning for the general reader.  It amazes me that a heart defect that Sharon has had all his life (which I assume is implied by "congenital") should "decide" to manifest itself right at this pivotal moment in his career, but that's life I guess (and I realize that my amazement is non-encyclopedic.)  6SJ7 03:30, 27 December 2005 (UTC)

Controversy
The hoax that was just included in this article and promptly erased is analyzed for example here. gidonb 17:32, 1 January 2006 (UTC)

Reported Death
I have a dispute with the last paragraph and with the first line which states that Sharon has died. No other source currently confirms that the massive stroke suffered by P.M. Sharon has led to his death. Neither Reuters/AP/Fox News/CNN has this info yet. We should hold off on his death date until it is clear that he has died. ber06122, January 4, 2006, 5:41 p.m. (EST)


 * I saw that, it really confused me since no news sources were reporting it. People just can't be patient and wait! Weatherman90 22:49, 4 January 2006 (UTC)

Sky News has just reported that Sharon's prognosis is "extremely bleak". However rumours of his death are greatly exaggurated. Don't report his death (which seems likely in today) until at a major source (BBC, ABC, NBC, Sky) confirms a newswire story. Newswires do report rumours and then withdraw them. The key is the TV broadcasts. They will double-check any reports with their own stringers in Jerusalem. If they state it as fact it usually (not always, but usually) means that they have verified it from two sources. A newswire report in isolation is no guarantee of accuracy. FearÉIREANN \<sup style="color:blue;">(caint) 23:04, 4 January 2006 (UTC)


 * The last time the major news agencies reported anything in unison, they said 12 miners in the 2006 Sago Mine disaster were alive. Just pointing that out.  BlueGoose 00:58, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Just want to say that almost all the news nets have been practically putting his coffin in the ground for the last two hours with their "Life After Sharon" analysis bits - even though it's obvious he's about to die it's still in bad taste. PMA 02:09, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

This article has been under vandalism attack for hours, in all cases it seems from anonymous IPs. Rather than protect it and stop all edits to it, as was requested, I have imposed semi-protection, which will allow its updating from registered users but stop people just coming on to WP to attack this article. That seems to be the major problem right now &mdash; visiting editors who edit nothing else but this because of its news worthiness. FearÉIREANN \<sup style="color:blue;">(caint) 00:13, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Can you just Put one of those New-Fangled Semi-Protection things on it. The stroke section needs expansion. --Irishpunktom\talk 00:24, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Inform me
I am a novice when it comes to Israeli Politics, and I am wondering what would happen should Ariel Sharon actually die. Would a member of his party take over; and if so how would Israeli policy change? I appreciate any help that you can provide. Avengerx 03:43, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
 * According to Prime minister of Israel, in this particular case, Deputy Premier Ehud Olmert would take over on a temporary basis. It doesn't seem clear whether there'd be a new election, or what (or if it is clear, that article needs updating).  -- Pakaran 04:23, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
 * According to, Olmert can serve for 100 days, at which time the government falls (and presumably an election is held). -- Pakaran 04:55, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Actually as per the President will choose someone to form a government.

I vaguely remember when Yitzhak Rabin was assasinated, Shimon Peres took over as PM. BlueGoose 06:40, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Ehud Olmert is the acting prime minister, according to law. He was appointed to be the stand-in prime minister in 2003, long before the current events. He is a rather experienced politician - Knesset member since the 70's (like Sharon!), held several ministerial portfolios (industry, finance, health etc.), mayor of Jerusalem for 10 years. He is also number 2 in Sharon's new Kadima party. However he is nowhere near Sharon in terms of charisma and popularity - and experience too. The elections will probably still be held on the 28th of March. Sharon was, until yesterday, thought to be the sure winner, however now things are not clear at all. It is highly unlikely now that Sharon will run at all. That makes Benjamin Netanyahu and Amir Peretz much more likely contenders for the post. Any current speculations are not worth much.--Amir E. Aharoni 09:34, 5 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the info, everyone. Avengerx 13:18, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

please add wikinews box
Which produces:


 * I forgot about semi protection. sorry. Bawolff 05:29, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Done, also removed semi-protection for now, I'll keep an eye on the article though. -- Pakaran 05:30, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Somewhat Strange Space After Link
Towards the middle/end of the third paragraph in the introduction there is a somewhat stranged space after a link and before a period. This isn't the only instance in which this occurs; the same thing is present in the http article. When I went to edit that article to fix it, the word that was linked in the non-edit version of the article didn't appear to be linked at all in the edit version, meaning there was no link format at all, if that makes sense to anyone. Now there are certainly better things to worry about as far as the article goes, and it doesnt at all hinder the information presented, I figured I would just bring it up, if for nothing else than my own curiosity as to why those spaces are there. --Zachjones4 05:50, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

separation of early life and early military career
When I read the article, it kind of seems like the information about his early life shouldn't be lumped in with his early military career, although the transition between his pre-adolecent years and his joining the paramilitary group ties in nicely. The awkward part is when it jumps from the merging of Unit 101 with the 202nd Paratroopers brigade to the fact that he has been widowed twice. --Zachjones4 05:55, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Eternal judgement
In front of the Eternal Judge the Sharon will have to account for Shatila and Sabla! Make it clear, he will not meet Gandhi and Mother Theresa in the afterlife. 195.70.32.136 09:15, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Will he be busy beating the crap out of Hitler in the afterlife then?!--CAN T 20:41, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * Source? --24.31.29.171 09:48, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Tsk tsk, POV, another POV is that he will be high fived for Sabra and Shatila but will have to account for the Gaza ethnic cleansing and other Judenrat actions. Kuratowski&#39;s Ghost 02:28, 7 January 2006 (UTC)


 * The President of Iran just said in public that "the executioner of Shatila and Sabla will join his ancestors in hell". It is all over world news sites.


 * For 195.70.32.136: Judge not, that ye may not be judged (Matthew 7:1) CharonX 01:29, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * For CharonX:People judge and kill others for millenia.So whats the harm to shout a bit of hatred in virtual world.Can anyone with an unbiased mind believe that he will be sitting in Paradise?If he does,I'll beg to get into hell.--CAN T 20:46, 26 April 2006 (UTC)


 * We must condemn evil. Do you think that we shall not condemn the nazism? The zionists do to palestinians exactly what nazis did to the jews. Lebensraum: the desire to displace people from their land of birth and use the territory for the sole benefit of the master race. Jews think they are a superior race over arabs and persians, they even did human experiments together with apartheid South Africa to develop diseases that attack negro and arabs, but leave white bosses and juden intact. They developed nukes to eliminate those "inferior races". Sharon did encourage such great crimes against humanity in his high military and political positions. He was utmost evil. 195.70.48.242 10:59, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

ok, you want some statistics? "Only 0.25% of the world population is Jewish, but Jews make up an estimated 28% of Nobel prize winners in physics, chemistry, medicine, and economics". http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ashkenazi_intelligence i am in no way trying to say that jews are superior - that would be stupid. what i am trying to say is that those anti-jewish comments seem to develop from envy.

Hold it, people! looks like this turned out to be the "curse Sharon club". are you guys aware that back in the 1940s the arabs were harassing the jews in the holy land? And in 1948 Israel suffered an unprovoked attack from 5 arab nations with the explicit sole purpose of massacre? you're mixing up the victims and agressors! And has Ahmadinejad ever been to hell? Does he have proof that Sharon's ancestors are in such a place? I don't think so. And most important of all, has anyone ever seen or heard any israeli leader cursing other prominent arab figures? Absolutely not! Ahmadinejad is 100% ignorant hatred.

Well,boom.They name you Anti-Semitist,without realizing the exact etymological meaning of this new argumental weapon.--CAN T 20:41, 26 April 2006 (UTC)

"diseases that attack negro and arabs, but leave white bosses and juden intact"

No.Jews and Arabs hail from the same gene-pool.Semitic(yes,SEMITIC).A gene-disease which kills Arabs also should kill Jews just as easily.Your post smacks of urban legends.--CAN T 20:46, 26 April 2006 (UTC)

"will have to account for the Gaza ethnic cleansing" - another ignorant prat who doesn't even know what ethnic cleansing means. But then, it's not unexpected to see illiterate antisemites congregating here. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 172.142.51.19 (talk) 13:40, 3 February 2008 (UTC)

Photo of Ehud Olmert?
While Deputy Prime Minister Ehud Olmert is relevant to the failing health of Prime Minister Ariel Sharon, what's the purpose of placing Ehud Olmert's photo on Sharon's page? --Scottie theNerd 13:51, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree Olmert's picture is not relevant to Sharon's article --Cramer 14:15, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

I've removed Olmert's image for above reasons. If anyone feels like it should re-inserted, feel free to discuss it here. --Scottie theNerd 14:47, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * FWIW, I agree with its removal. --Elliskev 14:52, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

Sabra and Shatilla edits
I think that characterizing the first Sabra and Shatilla massacre as "one of the worst exterminations of the 20th century" is both a POV violation and patently false; as tragic and deplorable as it was, it didn't reach the proportions of countless others. --Leifern 16:33, 5 January 2006 (UTC)

True - Srebrenica, for example, saw 8000+ Bosnian Muslims massacred over a period of days by the Serbs. And let's not forget Hama, where tens of thousands of Syrians were killed by Assad - or the genocide against the Kurds and the Marsh Arabs by Saddam Hussein, or the killing of Lebanese Christians at Darmour, or the Killing Fields of Cambodia, or My Lai - the list goes on... Lebanon was a hideous war and Shatila and Sabra a terrible atrocity but its not one of the worst exterminations of the 20th Century. I'm surprised Sharon is not condemned more for the bombing of Beirut. Shatila and Sabra have become emblematic of something. Its worth remembering that the shock of it brought thousands of Israelis out onto the street in protest. User: ThePeg 16.15. 2.6.2006

That sounds like justification for a huge amount of deaths Robert Taylor 19:49, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * There are some claims here that Syria is responsible for Sabra and Shatila. This is a viewpoint held by a very tiny minority since it suggests that Israel and Syria were allies cooperating with each other during the massacre.  Either way, it does not belong in an article about Ariel Sharon. Yuber(talk) 02:05, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

I've removed the word "strangely" from the phrase " "Strangely, The Kahan Commission also claimed ...," as it is clearly POV. Gni 21:25, 10 January 2006 (UTC)

The Sabra/Shatilla section has become disturbingly partisan. One added section reads: "The subsequent Israeli Kahan commission of enquiry into this atrocity provided absolute proof that Israeli soldiers saw the massacre taking place. The evidence of a Lieutenant Avi Grabovsky was crucial. He was an Israeli deputy tank commander and reported what he saw to his higher command. He was told by his senior officers: 'Don't interfere.'" Saying in introducing the Kahan report that the report "provided absolute proof..." is a misrepresentation of the Kahan report. The Kahan report actually concluded that "...we determine that indeed I.D.F. soldiers who were near the embankment which surrounded the camp saw certain acts of killing and an attempt was made to report this to commanders of higher ranks; but this report did not reach Brigadier General Yaron or Major General Drori." Indeed, Grabovsky never claimed that he himself was told "Don't interfere" by senior officers. Rather, he said that he was anecdotally by collegues that officers responded to an earlier radio bulletin by someone else that they are disturbed by the reports, but that the soldier should not interfere. I'm removing the reference to Grabovsky. If it is to be in, it should reflect the actual contents, and just as importantly, the actual tenor of the Kahan report. Gni 21:44, 10 January 2006 (UTC)


 * This is becoming annoying to be honest, people are only insisting on including the softer parts of the Kahan Commission and refusing to include any other sources on the massacre. I have added a part about Palestinian survivor testimonies, which I referenced.  Please do not remove it, it is laughable that some of you want to make sure that the viewpoints of the survivors, who were not consulted for the Kahan Commission, are not included.


 * Also, Gaborsky clearly said that he was told not to interfere, and I reinstated that part. If you don't like that fact, you shouldn't remove it.


 * I suggest you reread the report, carefully. Again, Grabowsky was never told by his senior officers "don't interfere." Grabowsky spoke with a tank crew, whose members claimed to have heard a communications report in which a commander had said, "We know, it's not to our liking, and don't interfere." I will paste the text of the report below. Secondly, if you are quoting a sentence fragment ("Don't interfere"), it needs an ellipsis. But in this case, it is downright distortion to quote "Don't interfere" instead of the full quote: "We know, it's not to our liking, and don't interfere." In any case, as it is, it is simply incorrect. I am removing it again. Maybe the administrator could take a look at the Kahan report to verify that commanders never told Grabowsky "don't interfere," but rather a tank crew told him that they heard a commander say the bit. Finally, how is it neutral POV to claim that other investigations "have all been more candid" than the Kahan report. I'm not interested in getting into which reports are more orless candid here in discussion--and such point of view certainly does not belong in the article itself.


 * Here is the actual text from the Kahan report regarding Grabowsky:
 * Lieutenant Grabowsky wanted to report the event by communications set to his superiors, but the tank crew told him that they had already heard a communications report to the battalion commander that civilians were being killed, [and] the battallion commander had replied, "We know, it's not to our liking, and don't interfere."  Gni 02:35, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

No title
To the ignorant administrator (Markasexander100) who keeps revising my grammatical revisions and changing of such misnamings as "Israeli Defense Forces" to "Israel Defense Forces" (its proper name), you're a clown. Don't mess with my edits; I'm not vandalizing anything - I'm fixing the inconsistencies in grammar in this article and adding minor details of an impartial nature. Also, ignorant administrator, I am something you're not: a speaker of Hebrew, and with the knowledge of that language, I'm correcting some of the transliterations from Hebrew to English in certain people's names. Why not have the Hebrew names as the people who have the names say them, as opposed to the way people ignorant of the Hebrew language say them? Additionally, ignorant administrator, you list yourself as a native speaker of English, but since you reverted all of my edits, which included corrections of grammatical errors and inconsistencies in the article, I obviously not only know a language that you don't know, I also know how to speak your own language better than you. I'm a professional writer and a historian by training with a much deeper knowledge of the Middle East than yours. My mother grew up a few miles from Sharon's ranch; Sharon knows people who live in my mother's community. I feel that I'm entitled thus to add a few minor facts. Now, if you have a problem with how infinitesimally longer the article is becoming because of my edits (and it's probably not because I'm taking out a few misplaced letters here and there, along with my minor additions), you should say so. Be true to the scholarship in which Wikipedia believes - proper scholarship, not your personal non-scholarship. If you don't change my changes (all made in good will), I apologize to you in advance. Unsigned by 66.214.230.155


 * .ויקיפדיה אינה בימת נאומים El_C 22:12, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * If you're User:66.214.230.155 I reverted your edit which broke a link to Labour (Israel). I suggest you check the edit history before being so silly in future. Mark1 23:50, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I also fixed that, I believe on more than one occasion. El_C 01:18, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Let's keep this civil. I greatly appreciate your contributions El_C, but please calm down a bit - calling people ignorant won't help resolve this matter in any way. CharonX 01:23, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Heh, that wasn't me. :) El_C 02:22, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Arabic Name
While Arabic is an offical language in Israel, I don't understand what Ariel Sharon's name needs to be written in Arabic in this article. I do not see any precedent to this with other Israeli figures. The original name is in Hebrew and should only be translated to Hebrew. Thoughts? --Cramer 22:24, 5 January 2006 (UTC)


 * No harm in it; he is the PM of country with a substantial Arab-speaking population. El_C 02:26, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Yes but the original name is in Hebrew, not Arabic. --Cramer 10:46, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * In some countries (like mine) with more than one official language it's specifically allowed by law to adress to the head of state by its name "translated" to any of the official languages. Maybe something similar happens in Israel? --62.57.93.138 18:31, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
 * If we are going let this through, then all Israeli names on Wikipedia ought to be translated to Arabic as well. --Cramer 20:12, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks to whoever removed it --Cramer 10:57, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

PM status
Don't change the succession box yet. Sharon remains Prime Minister until either one of three things happens: (1) he dies, (2) he resigns, or (3) he is declared permanently incapacitated. He is currently temporarily incapacitated as far as the law is concerned, ie, they do not know officially whether he can resume the post or not. (In practice he probably cannot, but that isn't officially declared yet.) His deputy is merely acting PM (ie, he isn't PM but fulfils the role). As of now he will not feature in the list of Israeli PMs. Only if Sharon is declared permanently incapacitated will the deputy assume not merely the powers but the role of PM.

BTW does any know what the technical procedure is for formally declaring an Israeli PM incapacitated? Some countries require Supreme Courts to issue such a ruling. Others require a ruling of parliament, or of the Parliamentary Speaker, or of the cabinet, or of the cabinet secretary, or of the head of state? What is the formal procedure in Israel? It might be useful for WP to know, because given Sharon's condition it is only a matter of when, not if, that ruling is made and he is deemed to no longer be PM. Alternatively though, it could be decided not to make such a ruling, but to leave him theoretically in office and continue using an acting PM (on the basis that sympathy for Sharon would boost his party's prospects in the general election). But leaving him in power would be controversial. Unusually a constitutionally independent officer or organisation has the task of ruling someone permanently incapacitated and so de jure terminate their premiership. FearÉIREANN \<sup style="color:blue;">(caint)
 * I agree with you - de facto he ceased to be PM when he had the massive stroke but de jure he still holds the office. (One of the medical experts the BBC had on last night said that if it was anybody but the PM, they would've stopped trying to save him by then as the prognosis with this kind of stroke is so dire.) PMA 02:14, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Note my changes to Israel. El_C 02:23, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

The Big Question
No matter what you think of Ariel Sharon's life, a big unanswered question hangs over Israel and the world: What now? unsigned by 67.50.32.67


 * Now we wait. El_C 02:52, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

The answer is,there are hundreds of people in Israel like him.Another one will be elected.That's my opinion after the death of Yitzak Rabin.Yes it is.--85.105.127.49 08:55, 27 April 2006 (UTC)

Converting to Template:Ref and Template:Note
Any chance of converting the inline links to and ? - Ta bu shi da yu 03:06, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Go for it! What? El_C 04:44, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * It might be easier to use as described here.  --  JeremyA 04:53, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Date mistake?
Under "Early life", 3rd paragraph:


 * In 1994, he was promoted to company commander and in 1951 to intelligence officer.

I think the date 1994 is incorrect, as it doesn't make much sense otherwise...


 * I don't know for sure, but I'm gonna go ahead and agree with you, and go out on what I consider to be a fairly sturdy limb and propose that it's prolly sposta be 1949 instead of 1994. Tom e r<sup style="font-variant: small-caps; color: #129dbc!important;">talk  20:55, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * This was a recent act of vandalism. GabrielF 20:59, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Sharon became commander of the Golani Brigade's reconnaissance company in September 1949. (Sharon, Ariel (2001). Warrior: An Autobiography. Simon & Schuster. ISBN 074322566X, p. 68), but he became an intelligence officer for Central Command in 1950 (p. 69). --Ian Pitchford 21:25, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Medical issues
I agree with moving the detail to another article - Nixon's bio just says basically "on April 18, 1994 he suffered a major stroke and died four days later" - something simple like that can also be used when Sharon dies. PMA 21:21, 6 January 2006 (UTC)
 * A lot of the TV news nets are suggesting that after Sharon the political parties or the Israeli people might go for "young and healthy" in their next long term leader rather than someone like Shimon Peres who is 82. PMA 21:35, 6 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Well, Nixon didn't suffer a stroke while in office, so it attracted considerably less attention, and had considerably less impact on world affairs. --Delirium 23:54, 6 January 2006 (UTC)

Sharon's Hebrew name
It's Ariel Ben Devorah, maybe someone can squeeze that in somewhere. I also notice that the name Arik is not mentioned anywhere in the article. Arik is to Ariel as Robert is to Bob and, especially in Israel, Sharon goes by Arik. - Pyro19 02:06, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Well, surely his Hebrew name is "Ariel Sharon" and his 'European name' or whatever is "Ariel Scheinermann". If he was a Middle Ages rabbi rather than a 21st century Israeli politican maybe he would be known as "Ariel, son of X", but surely one would use his father's name here rather than his mother's.--Pharos 02:17, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * He only has one common name, Scheinerman was his birth name and he later changed it to Sharon. A Hebrew name, sometimes known as a Jewish name, is something else (read this for an explanation). You're right though that it must be his father's name rather than his mother's, so it would be Ariel ben Shmuel. I bring this up now because as people are praying for him they are using his Hebrew name. I don't really care if it's in the article, I'm just bringing it to peoples attention.


 * I've decided to throw Arik in the article because, quite frankly, it's bizarre for an article on Sharon to not even mention the word. - Pyro19 08:28, 7 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Yeah, I know what a Hebrew name is; it's just to me a concept that doesn't make as much sense for an Israeli Jew named Ariel as for an American Jew named George or something. For Israelis, the "son of"/"daughter of" form is just a traditional patronymic; it's not any more "Hebrew" than their ordinary name.  Of course "Arik" belongs in the article; it certainly was here before and must have been removed very recently.  I think it would be a bit overkill to include "Ariel ben Shmuel", but it certainly would be appropriate to include the names of his parents, which communicates the same information.--Pharos 08:59, 7 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Yeah, you're right. His parents name should be enough. - Pyro19 10:01, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

The Ariel ben Dvora thing is being spread around by people (family, rabbis, various kibbitzers) requesting that people (individuals, synagogues, various follow-the-leader types) say a misheberakh for Ariq. Since his father is Jewish, his Hebrew name if he were to be called for an `aliya would be ben Shmu`el, not ben Dvora (although in some congregations it might be ben Shmu`el uDvora [ben Shmu`el's dad, etc.]). That said, I rather doubt that Sharon (as an Ashkenazi) actually considers his father's name to be part of his own. Not that I'm presuming to speak for him, but afaik, that's not part of Ashkenazi naming convention. Tom e r<sup style="font-variant: small-caps; color: #129dbc!important;">talk 08:15, 9 January 2006 (UTC)


 * "Arik is to Ariel as Robert is to Bob" - just wanted to check, did you mean the other way around? The way the article currently reads gives the impression Arik is the diminutive, i.e. Bob. CarlosCoppola 06:49, 30 July 2006 (UTC)

Sabra and Shatila: contradicting understatement/weasels in the intro?
The Sabra and Shatila references in the intro and appropriate section seem out of tune with each other. The intro states:

''Furthermore, some consider certain of his wartime actions (particularly during the 1982 Lebanon War, see below) to have been war crimes.''

The 'Sabra and Shatila massacre' section reveals that it was the Kahan Commission that recommended Sharon to be removed from his post as defense minister because:

''We have found, as has been detailed in this report, that the Minister of Defense [Ariel Sharon] bears personal responsibility. In our opinion, it is fitting that the Minister of Defense draw the appropriate personal conclusions arising out of the defects revealed with regard to the manner in which he discharged the duties of his office...''

In my opinion, if the Kahan Commision reference is correct, the intro needs to be rewritten. While some consider his wartime actions to have been war crimes, I think it should be remarked in the intro that a government-appointed Israeli commission recommended his removal from office, because he bears personal responsibility.

Given the controversial topic, I'd like to hear some feedback before anyone touches the intro. 213.140.21.231 10:28, 7 January 2006 (UTC)

While the Kahan Commission refers to "personal responsibility," this is only after it makes clear that "absolutely no direct responsibility devolves upon Israel or upon those who acted in its behalf." The reference is to Sharon's "indirect responsibility"--a point that isn't (but probably should be) made clear in the "Sabra and Shatila" section. 24.61.42.54 02:28, 8 January 2006 (UTC)

In FROM BEIRUT TO JERUSALEM Thomas Friedman, who was there immediately, writes that the animals were killed also. Charon took the Old Testament literally. A Bible story has King Saul's god telling him that if a town refuses to give up the men that the women, children and animals must be killed. Arafat escaped with his 15000 armed men and the US marines were pledged to remain there a month but were withdrawn in two weeks allowing the IDF to surround the camps ans allow the Christian Phalangists to enter. When Sharon visited BushII's ranch he commented that he had collected the Cedars of Lebanon when he was there in '82. These are menitoned in the OT as necessary to construct the temple. Sharon's use of OT ideas as guides for today's actions is worthy of discussion. thirdtemple.com templemountfaithful.comJohnshoemaker (talk) 13:55, 25 February 2008 (UTC)

Dead?
Does anyone else get the feeling that Sharon is dead and the media is just giving the public time to absorb the fact that they may lose this public figure? JoachimK 19:23, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * No. El_C 21:24, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * If he were, there's no reason anyone would announce that he's improving. Not to mention that for any individual media outlet, being the first to announce his death would be a major scoop. -- Pakaran 21:38, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Nope, though I do get a deja vu sensation of what happened with Arafat, SqueakBox 21:39, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Sharon's surgeon has just said his chance for survival is high. - Pyro19 22:33, 7 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Head of neurology dept. at a major Israeli hopsital said that of these types of cases: 25% die within a few days, and of the seventy five percent that live beyond that, 25% get better and 50% show no improvement. El_C 01:40, 8 January 2006 (UTC)


 * People love to believe they aren't being told the whole truth. Perhaps this skepticism is good, because it ensures that people will always doubt and check the media's source material, creating greater accuracy. At the same time, I don't really think the media has a vested interest in lying about Ariel Sharon's medical crisis. People are probably more distressed now, because there's so many possible outcomes (death? full recovery? Partial recovery? Permanent disability? Resumption of political activity? Cessation of political activity and retirement into obscurity?) than there would be if there was only one outcome (death). Think of how you would feel if someone you felt passionately about (love or hate) were in a coma. Would you feel more relief if they were dead? At least then, you'd know what to expect. Now, no-one knows anything. &mdash;the preceding unsigned comment is by 67.50.32.67 (talk • contribs)
 * Huh. Again with the he's-already-dead-and-nobody-is-telling-us thing.  Please! Sharon is not dead and Elvis is not alive ;)  Redux 22:53, 8 January 2006 (UTC)

External link
Can someone explain why the external link I added was deleted? (It was to this timeline: http://camera.org/index.asp?x_context=2&x_outlet=118&x_article=1054) Not only is it informative, but it certainly looks like the external links could use some balance, with two links to the virulently anti-Israel Electronic Intifada, and only one to an Israeli perspective source. I put the link back in--if it for some reason it shouldn't be there, could someone please explain why, and explain wikipedia's exteral link policy. Thanks. 24.61.42.54 01:17, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
 * I don't find it that informative; it appears to depict a timeline already covered by the article. If a few items aren't, they can be added, no? El_C 01:36, 8 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Is so, the same would certainly apply to the two external links going to the Electronic Intifada Web site. 24.61.42.54 04:31, 9 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I don't know what that is. El_C 05:05, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

Death rumors
According to the World Tribune, Sharon was declared dead by 6 AM EST on Friday January 6th by physicians at Jerusalem's Hadassah Hospital.

'' A computed tomography scan taken on Friday morning showed little to no brain activity in Sharon. At that point, Sharon's son, Omri, called aides and senior officials to the hospital to prepare for an announcement of the prime minister's death.''

http://www.worldtribune.com/worldtribune/06/front2453741.9118055557.html

The problem is, in this case what does "death" mean? Is it complete death, just brain death, or what?

Flypanam 00:56, 9 January 2006 (UTC)


 * It means clinical death, I think. All of this will likely become clear soon. Even though no one had said anything at this stage, it looks likely that they'll set up a commission to look into the health care he recieved, esp. why he wasn't forced to rest after the 1st stroke (see this). El_C 05:13, 9 January 2006 (UTC)


 * I have changed the title of this section from "Sharon's Dead? Or Is He?" to "Death Rumors."  Based on the news, it appears very much as if he is NOT dead.  Even the worldtribune.com story linked-to above states both that he is, and is not, dead.  Of course it could all be one huge conspiracy and he really did pass away on Friday but it is being covered up for some unfathomable reason.  But I don't think so.  Anyway, I changed the heading so nobody looks at it and immediately decides Sharon is dead, when all the current evidence suggests he is not.  (For some reason I have this sudden desire to watch Monty Python and the Holy Grail.)   6SJ7 19:44, 9 January 2006 (UTC)


 * It has now occurred to me that if some people on Wikipedia do believe Sharon is dead and that a massive coverup is underway, that would just be par for the course. See the article, Apollo moon landing hoax accusations, which not only exists, it has a tag stating that it is a controversial topic!  6SJ7 04:07, 10 January 2006 (UTC)

Lead heavy
At the moment we have far too much detail in the lead section, and we should avoid this, even for subjects that are high-profile current events. I propose we move nearly all the information about the stroke from the lead section to the "Health problems" section, leaving only a sentence or two in the lead. It's tempting, but Wikipedia articles are meant to be encyclopedia articles, and we should resist the pressure to warp them into quasi news reports. &mdash;The preceding unsigned comment was added by Matt Crypto (talk • contribs) 11:56, 9 January 2006 (UTC).
 * I have no objections, Anon Matt, but others may. Best wait for more input. El_C 13:18, 9 January 2006 (UTC)

Sabra and Shatila
I find this paragraph was better before and that additional information should only be written in the article dedicated to this. Alithien 15:31, 11 January 2006 (UTC)

Introduction
Do we really need three huge paragraphs in the introduction, taking up more than half the section, dedicated to his hospitalization? This wouldn't be a standard part of a biography. Put it this way: If, a month from now, he were well again, or if, a month from now, he were dead, would we want such a long section on his coma in the introduction? No. Just because it's a current event shouldn't give the event such huge prominence in the introduction &mdash; there should be a short reference to it, and then the information should be in the article's body. &mdash; Asbestos | Talk   (RFC)  15:46, 11 January 2006 (UTC)


 * You're right, but... You could put all of the details in the section later in the article regarding his health, and/or in the separate article about his health, but I suspect someone will just come along and add a lot of that stuff back into the intro.  This (these) article(s) will not stabilize until after Sharon's situation does (for good or for bad) and the information can be added, rationally, into the right places in the article, and the "Illnesses" article can (probably) be merged back into this one.  But that just isn't the case, yet.  6SJ7 00:22, 12 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Well, if someone came along and added stuff back in the intro, then they could be reverted easily enough. Wikipedia has quite well-established conventions about the lead section. I don't see why we need warp a decent encyclopedia article into a hybrid news piece simply because the topic happens to be a high profile current event. Wikipedia should be kept current, of course, and often does make a good source for current events, but our primary goal is to write high-quality encyclopedia articles. &mdash; Matt Crypto 00:38, 12 January 2006 (UTC)


 * Matt, I see you have made the changes. I think you have done a good job, let's hope it sticks.  6SJ7 01:02, 12 January 2006 (UTC)  (I put this in the wrong place the first time.)
 * Yeah, I think this is much better. Asbestos 02:06, 14 January 2006 (UTC)


 * While I agree that this is what occurs, 6SJ7, I think it's particularly important that articles involved in current events should be at their most professional. I imagine that the Sharon article is getting a much greater surge of hits than it has in recent months, and that many people searching for information about Sharon who come to this article are relatively new to Wikipedia. That's why I think that professionality ought to be more strict for current events, not less. &mdash; Asbestos | Talk   (RFC)  00:57, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

Qibya
Can whoever is claiming 99 killed at Qibya please provide a reputable source? I can find nothing claiming 99. Even harshly anti-Israel sources claim 69, for example: Electronic Intifada, al-Jazeera , PalestineCampaign


 * 69 is the correct figure for Qibya itself, but two-thirds, not half, were women and children. --Ian Pitchford 10:22, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

Medical Bloopers


Doctors have now discovered that Sharon suffers from cerebral amyloid angiopathy, which predisposes one to brain hemmorhages, and should not have been placed on long term anticoagulant medication following treatment of his earlier minor stroke.

Oops.

Hermitian 05:07, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

Ideology and Beliefs
Let's please remember this is an encyclopedia, not an avenue for hyperbole. The claims that Sharon "was never apologetic" and "had no moral qualms with keeping his country secure by any means necessary" are hyperbole. I've removed them.

I've also removed the following quote, pending which appears to be one of the many hoax quotes circulating around the internet. A nexis search reveals that neither AFP nor any other outlet reported Sharon saying the quote:

"It is the duty of Israeli leaders to explain to public opinion, clearly and courageously, a certain number of facts that are forgotten with time. The first of these is that there is no Zionism, colonialization, or Jewish State without the eviction of the Arabs and the expropriation of their lands." (Agence France Presse, November 15, 1998.)

As such, I've removed the quote.

What's more, this certainly can't be said to represent Sharon's "ideology and beliefs", even from the time. In fact, on Nov. 17, one day before the alleged quote, Sharon spoke before the Israeli Knesset, saying:

"I know of no other nation that would give up land embodying its historical heritage, but the government had to decide whether we want to make a genuine, sincere effort to reach arrangements that may some day, God willing, bring peace between us and our neighbours. The government's answer was yes. I, too, decided to try to reach an arrangement with the Palestinians."

So again, let's all be careful to keep within Wikipedia guidelines, and, of course, to stay accurate. Thanks. Gni 19:22, 12 January 2006 (UTC)

you are absolutely right. i completely agree with you.

Passages Palgiarized from Fisk
I've noticed that some contributors have been copying passages from articles by Robert Fisk and pasting them into the body of the article (without quotes or citation, as if it was written by a contributor). That's alarming not as much because of the clear plagiarism, but because turning the wikipedia article into a Robert Fisk article hardly bodes well for neutrality.

This passage from a 4/17/01 Fisk article, for example, was pasted right into the Ideology & Beliefs section:

"He voted against the peace treaty with Egypt in 1979. He voted against a withdrawal from southern Lebanon in 1985. He opposed Israel's participation in the Madrid peace conference in 1991. He opposed the Knesset plenum vote on the Oslo agreement in 1993. He abstained on a vote for peace with Jordan in 1994. He voted against the Hebron agreement in 1997. He condemned the manner of Israel's retreat from Lebanon in 2000"

The passage about Lt. Grabowsky in the Kahan report, which has been removed due to inaccuracy (see Sabra Shatila discussion above), was similarly pasted directly from a Fisk article.

I hope all agree that there is, and must remain, an essential difference between a neutral Wikipedia encyclopedia entry and a partisan Fisk opinion column. Gni 21:31, 12 January 2006 (UTC)
 * I agree. Alithien 09:12, 13 January 2006 (UTC)
 * Ya...In my view, this kind of thing belongs as a polemical prooftext in the Robert Fisk article, not here. Tom e r<sup style="font-variant: small-caps; color: #129dbc!important;">talk  06:17, 16 January 2006 (UTC)

Weisglass Interview
The passage on Gaza evacuation states that "Dov Weisglass was quoted in Haaretz on October 6, 2004, as saying the purpose of disengagement was to destroy Palestinian aspirations for a state for years to come." Only a miniscule fraction of the Weisglass interview was published in the Oct. 6 Haaretz. The full interview was published Oct. 8, and it became clear that the Haaretz "teaser" from Oct. 6 distorted and took out of context Weisglass' words. In the full interview, Weissglas says nothing about "destroying Palestinian aspirations," and it is disingenuous and partisan POV to word it this way. He said in the interview that the gaza disengagement came after Israel, along with the U.S., "reached the sad conclusion that there is no one to talk to, no one to negotiate with" on the Palestinian side. "What's important is the formula that asserts that the eradication of terrorism precedes the start of the political process," Weissglas noted. This principle, he said, was the main achievement of the "road map" peace plan. According to Weissglas, Israel was pushed to the disengagement idea because the Palestinians were not fulfilling their obligations under the "road map". With the "road map" stalled, he explained, Sharon realized Israel would be pressured to negotiate even while the terrorism continued and that the principle calling for an immediate stop to Palestinian violence would be "annulled." He continued: "And with the annulment of that principle, Israel would find itself negotiating with terrorism. And because once such negotiations start it's very difficult to stop them, the result would be a Palestinian state with terrorism ... The disengagement plan is the preservative of the sequence principle. It is the bottle of formaldehyde within which you place the president's formula so that it will be preserved for a very lengthy period. The disengagement is actually formaldehyde." Gni 16:50, 15 January 2006 (UTC)

Scheinermann
I'm surprised the article doesn't mention when or why Sharon changed his name from "Ariel Scheinermann" to "Ariel Sharon". It really should be in the article. Mike Dillon 19:48, 29 January 2006 (UTC)


 * It is very common for Jews to change their name to a Hebrew one when they immigrate to Israel.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 03:13, 25 February 2006 (UTC)


 * This is very tue, however Sharon was born during the British Mandate in today's Israel. In addition to the immigration event, people also changed names at later stages, especially in the public service. In government agencies there were expectations, and possibly also requirements, of anyone from certain levels of management and command to change names. gidonb 04:09, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

External link removed
Can someone please justify the removal of the external link to the article 'Ariel Sharon: an Israeli Caligula'? (http://www.obelus.org/index.php?artID=15) Since this essay is a comprehensive chronology of Sharon's war crimes, fully annotated, and with most of the sources being themsleves Israeli, I can't see how it could be considered unsuitable: on the contrary, it does prompt one to suspect that there are other motives for its removal. Which why I am asking for an explanation.

Give me a break, Comparing a mainstream politician to Caligula, not NPOV buddy.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 03:11, 25 February 2006 (UTC)

Overview
I don't think that Qibya events worth being included in overview. It's balanced enough, since sentences saying about Israel's "great strugles" doesn't mentioned any details, whereas "sabra massacre" is far from being NPOV. --tasc 11:51, 11 February 2006 (UTC)


 * I think that killing 69 civilians would be one of the most important events in a person's life. Imagine an article about German Chancellor Angela Merkel. If she had killed 69 Jews before becoming Chancellor, would it be worth mentioning in the introduction of her article?
 * So, than perhaps, military achivments should be highlighted as well, don't ya think? And how would than an overview look like? --tasc 12:03, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
 * His military achievements are already addressed. "Many Israelis consider him a war hero who helped defend the country during some of its greatest struggles" --83
 * Well, good. Then it should say: "Many anti Zionists consider him a war criminal, guilty in death of dozens of people", isn't it an equivalent? --tasc 12:20, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
 * When the criticism of Ariel Sharon is referred, it is misleading to present it like he is only criticized for the Sabra and Shatila massacres, when he in fact is criticized for a lot more, both the Quibya massacre and his actions as prime minister. --83
 * and than, we definitely should add critisims from Israeli rightists. They do also consider him a traitor. --tasc 12:03, 11 February 2006 (UTC)
 * If there is more criticism, add it if it is notable. The criticism for war crimes is very notable (compare: newspaper reports on Ariel Sharon in e.g. Europe and the Arab world). --83
 * Notable == loud? I thought an NPOV is a value, not a propaganda. --tasc 12:20, 11 February 2006 (UTC)

Health Problems or Incapacitation??
I believe the term "Incapacitation" does not accurately reflect the overall health ordeals Sharon has gone through. His health problems did not begin with his being comatose. I tried changing article title to "Health Problems and Subsequent Incapacitation" but it has been reversed to "Incapacitation". I'd say we should keep his illness a very brief memo on the page and link readers directly to his "Illnesses" page. Shiranweber 18:59, 24 February 2006 (UTC)Shiranweber

His previous health problems, whatever they were, were not politically important. He was after all a very overweight man in his 70s so he was bound to have some health problems, but so what? His stroke and subsequent incapacitation is what is politically important. In any case I intend completely rewriting this extremely poor article as soon as I get time and find some references. Adam 00:29, 25 February 2006 (UTC)
 * I agree that his incapacitation should surely be the focus of that section of the article, as that is what is politically significant.--Pharos 09:09, 10 March 2006 (UTC)

Sharon as controversial or not, inside Israel
Recently it has been argued that "Sharon is not particulary controversial inside Israel anymore".


 * Sharon has been a highly controversial figure, both in and outside Israel.

has been changed to


 * Sharon has been a highly controversial figure. Today his critics are mostly outside of Israel, but in the past he has been very controversial there as well.

Sharon is one of the most hawkish PMs ever, extremely controversial, and heavily criticized to this day inside Israel. I find this edit to be unsupported. However, if there is a reasonable number of citations from reputable scholarly or journalistic sources that generally agree that he is "not particulary controversial inside Israel anymore" then I would be very interested to read them, and will agree to the edit.--AladdinSE 11:03, 19 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I think the new text is simply wrong. Ignoring the suppression of criticism that occurred when he went into a coma, he is more controversial now than ever. The Gaza disengagement and surrounding events made him controversial amongst the right wing as well, whereas it used to be only amonst the left wing. --Zero 11:16, 19 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Some will claim he is controversial, some will claim he is not. Depends on one's POV. Why do we need such a statement at all? gidonb 18:12, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

"Controversial" is a meaningless POV word, and it's uncited here. The whole phrase should go, it adds nothing. Jayjg <small style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 18:14, 19 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I would support removing the entire phrase. What I meant to show, though in that edit I did it poorly, was that at the time of his coma, sharon was mroe popular than ever, it was wrong that I said he wasn't controversial because he clearly was, especially becasue of the disengagment plan, but he still had the support of a large majority of the population, and his party (that some said was his personal vehicle) is expected to gain a plurality on what some say is Sharon's persona.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 00:03, 20 March 2006 (UTC)


 * It is not meaningless. Areil Sharon is highly controversial. He attracts a great deal of passionate support and criticism, and always has. Sharon does happen to attract polarized opinions about himself and his policies. It is just flat out false to claim that he is no longer so since falling into a coma. However, if you really dispute that he is controversial and want citation, I understand, though it might seem strange to a reader that such a widely held view seems to require citation. More importantly, it's Moshe's edit that "Today his critics are mostly outside of Israel" which is false, and unsupported by citation. Also, Moshe's other changes and citations do not match. The BBC source he used does not say that at the time of his stroke Sharon enjoyed support "from most areas of the political spectrum" or that "Kadima is expected to gain a plurality in the 2006 national elections". I replaced one of the BBC sources with another that directly mentions what Kadima is expected to accomplish, and accurately correlated the information about support for Sharon at the time of the stroke, to the source. --AladdinSE 00:35, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

I had composed the above reply to Jayjg's last post, and thought that I saved it before I made this edit to the article, but it wasn't saved because the page had been altered while I was writing. It doesn't signify, since Moshe has accepted the rewording and source changes/correlation re support for Sharon and expectations of Kadima, and since there is no longer a claim that he is no longer much criticized in Israel, which was my principal objection, I find the removal of the "controversial" description to be adequate.--AladdinSE 00:35, 20 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Where did I say that he is no longer criticized since his coma? also I already changed the reference that his critics are mostly outisde of Israel long before you made this response so I don't quote understand the purpse of bringing it up again. And the three sources I added are all pointed to the conclusion that he had support from most areas of the political spectrum, but anyways that passage has been changed also.  The reason that the sources seemd to point to the wrong passages was becasue the order of words got all changed around.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 00:43, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

I didn't say that you said "he is no longer criticized since his coma". I said that you claimed that such criticism is mostly NOT in Israel, which is false. Here you said "Today his critics are mostly outside of Israel". And here you said "today however he is not as controversial in Israel as he once was", also not accurate and not supported by the source you inserted. None of the sources you cited 'pointed to the conclusion' that "he had support from most areas of the political spectrum". No sources 'pointed to the wrong passages'. My rewording was much more accurate, and the alternate BBC source I used was much more germane. Happily, you have accepted those changes.

Yes, you did change the reference re critics outside Israel, but hardly "long before my response". We were actually working at the same time. The reason I have inserted this comment, which was not saved due to simultaneous editing, was to show and explain that I did in fact contribute to Talk and explain my reasons for this edit. I was not bringing anything up again, I was inserting a comment that failed to save, because this comment was referenced in my edit summary. I did not want there to be a "see Talk" reference in one of my edit summaries with no corresponding Talk entries, that is all. --AladdinSE 01:08, 20 March 2006 (UTC)


 * Needless to say I completley disagree with pretty much everything you just wrote, however I see no reason to continue arguing about this since it has been resolved.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 01:13, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

Amen.--AladdinSE 01:16, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

"Butcher of Beirut", revisited
Please see: Talk:Ariel Sharon/Archive 2. --AladdinSE 11:08, 19 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I think this phrase is not encyclopedic enough for the introduction. It belongs in the Beirut-related part of the article.  --Zero 11:16, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

Actually, the Talk discussion and consensus regarding this issue did not discuss location in the article, only deletion or inclusion. Inclusion (but with citation) prevailed. Moshe's initial edit deleted it altogether, but I have no objection to moving it, sources and all. Looking back, I would not have objected to it being moved a year ago; but as I said, back then, that was not the issue. --AladdinSE 11:44, 19 March 2006 (UTC)
 * As I said back then, it's certainly not encyclopedic, and has no place here, particularly in the introduction. Jayjg <small style="color:darkgreen;">(talk) 17:18, 19 March 2006 (UTC)

We disagree, as we did a year ago, as to it being unencyclopedic, nevertheless after much discussion you agreed then to let it be. Happily, although we still disagree as to the premise of viability, we seem to have arrived at a consensus to place it in the Sabra and Chatila massacre section, and there's an end. At least, LOL, until a year from now when someone tries to remove it again.--AladdinSE 01:14, 20 March 2006 (UTC)


 * I don't think we reached any kind of consensus, just somewhat of a stop-gap measure until we do.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 01:31, 20 March 2006 (UTC)

Consensus does not mean that everyone is in total agreement. It means a course of action is developed, accepted and ultimately not challenged by the participants in the discussion. You were the first to move the material to the Sabra & Shatela massacre section, you will not be able to come back later and claim there was no consensus. --AladdinSE 00:11, 22 March 2006 (UTC)

Elections
If the elections formally ended his time in parliament, don't they also formally end his tenure as PM? PMA 04:43, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

Well if doesn't to either one for a couple of days until a new government is formed.- Moshe Constantine Hassan Al-Silverburg | Talk 04:47, 29 March 2006 (UTC)
 * I understand. Also in the infoboxes should we list that de jure date only or both it and the de facto date he ceased to be PM (4 January when he had the stroke)? PMA 04:50, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

length of hospital mistake?
"Sharon was hospitalised on December 18, 2005 after reportedly suffering a minor ischemic stroke. Sharon spent four days in hospital, and was released on December 20" someone needs to some math! 20-18!=4 --130.216.191.184 00:02, 12 April 2006 (UTC)

Illnesses of Ariel Sharon
i added a merge template on that page. there seems little reason for the article to exist outside of Ariel Sharon. It certainly has no permanent encyclopedic value. It's not as though his illness is either out of the ordinary for people his age or significant to his life. [anon user]

The Illnesses of Ariel Sharon is covering a current event, it should remain there until further developments. Joncnunn 20:57, 17 April 2006 (UTC)


 * That's completely irrelevant. Current events only get their own articles if they are encyclopedic.  50 years from now will Sharon's illness be any more significant than anyone elses?  If Sharon had a rare illness of some type, having its own article would make since.  Sharon is an obese old guy who had strokes.  That's not notable.  You don't make articles that have no long term significance.  The information should be merged into this article, where it belongs.  --MateoP 13:38, 28 April 2006 (UTC)

It was newsworthy while Sharon was PM. Now that he's not the situation is really no different than that of any other ailing ex-leader (eg Gerald Ford who is in declining health) so I don't think the spin-off article is warranted any longerHomey 21:01, 17 April 2006 (UTC)


 * I agree, this article should be merged ASAP if no one objects to it -- Snailwalker | talk 12:09, 31 May 2006 (UTC)

Miscreants
Can someone change the term "miscreants" in relation to destroying the Gaza synagogues after the Israeli withdrawal. It makes it seem like some kids hanging out when in reality it was Palestinians with hatred for Jews. —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Mister Nobody (talk • contribs).

It was Arabs - there are no 'Palestinians'.

if you're from the palestinian region you're palestinian unless you're israli oops i forgot to call israel and the surronding lands anything other than "the land the israelis' imaginary friend gave them" the palestinian people are just as fictional as the israeli people. how long will it take for someone to try and stifle my freedom of speech by calling me a bigot i wonder. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.162.105.30 (talk) 10:17, 5 August 2008 (UTC)

Lebanon Invasion
While the Sabra and Shatila massacre was undoubtedly a defining moment in Sharon’s history, I find that the article focuses too much on it while neglecting his vital role as the originator and architect of the Israeli invasion to Lebanon in 1982 (during which the massacre took place). His part in the Lebanon war was arguably the most significant thing he did in his career. This is not even mentioned in the article. Any thoughts? Amirig 22:31, 2 June 2006 (UTC)

Category:People charged with war crimes
There seems to be some dispute over if we should have this article in the category Category:People charged with war crimes or not. As per WP:BLP we should be carefull about such things. He have indeed been charged with war crimes as it says in the article. // Liftarn
 * Charged by whom? Pecher Talk 08:55, 10 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Relatives of the victims started procedings in Belgium as it says in the article. // Liftarn


 * People can only be called "charged" with a crime when they have been formally indicted by a court or another body, which has the legal right to issue indictments. This is not the case here. Pecher Talk 09:15, 10 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Far enough. According to WP:BLP we should be carefull not to add controversial categories without solid sources. Especially for living persons. // Liftarn


 * Is "charged" the same as "indicted"? And I thought the reason for being careful about living people is they might feel bad or they might sue...? Not that I have any strong opinion here, just putting my two cents in... DanielCristofani 07:00, 13 July 2006 (UTC)
 * In an encyclopedia I think we need to be "careful" about accusations that someone has been charged with a crime regardless of whether the person is living, or might feel bad or might sue. 6SJ7 16:00, 13 July 2006 (UTC)

No comment on the Category:People charged with war crimes, but I did remove Catgegory:Genocide as violating WP:OR, WP:RS, and WP:BLP. --Elliskev 12:46, 22 August 2006 (UTC)

Not called a coma after 6 weeks
The article correctly notes that Sharon is now in a PVS persistent vegetative state "a condition of patients with severe brain damage in whom coma has progressed to a state of wakefulness without detectable awareness." This means that Sharon should not be described as now being in a coma. We have the following three lines that therefore need revision:

However, now comatose, Sharon's chances for recovery are estimated as "very low".

doctors were quick to note that that was not unusual with comatose patients.

Sharon's doctors did not expect him to emerge from his coma in the foreseeable future

Comments or suggestions? Rabbi-m 04:19, 13 July 2006 (UTC)


 * Not necessarily, a coma is a coma. A PVS is when a patient awakes from a coma but has no perception of their surroundings.  Is there an official medical verdict on this available so we can clear this up?


 * According to http://www.ad.nl/buitenland/article1630890.ece he was still being in comma on September 2, 2007. The article notes that the condoleances registers are ready to be presented for signing for a year and a half. Generally, use Google news and search for Ariel Sharon. Tgeorgescu 19:57, 25 September 2007 (UTC)


 * Recently, I read in the papers, listened to TV news journal and I saw a documentary on electrodes being implanted in the brain ("brain stimulator"). Someone who was in comma for past 18 years has recovered awareness, and he can move a little (18 years is a long time to stay in bed, so his muscles are not trained to move). See e.g., http://www.mywire.com/pubs/PeoplesDailyChina/2007/08/02/4136217?&pbl=15 (I guess it was 6 years, in the news I heard, it was 18 years...) Tgeorgescu 19:57, 25 September 2007 (UTC)


 * See also: http://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/78524.php and http://www.nature.com/nature/journal/v448/n7153/abs/nature06041.html Tgeorgescu 20:01, 25 September 2007 (UTC)

Censorship
Why there is no mention in the article of the infamous Sharon remark to Perez: don't worry about US pressure, we jewish people control America? —The preceding unsigned comment was added by 195.70.32.136 (talk • contribs).
 * This user seems to be right. BhaiSaab talk 01:10, 29 July 2006 (UTC)
 * BhaiSaab, which source are you referring to? There's talk about this on the Ouze Merham page, if you do indeed find a source that confirms it, not just a bunch of search results, you may want to update that, too. CarlosCoppola 07:00, 30 July 2006 (UTC)


 * This hoax is also discussed on the CNI page. It's amazing how many people have fallen for it. Precis 09:28, 10 August 2006 (UTC)

Text direction
I keep looking at the source of the article and can't figure out how they got the text direction correct for the right-to-left Hebrew text amidst the left-to-right English text (look at the article on Paul Ben-Haim, at least two other people have tried to correct it and have failed). I looked in the history, but there are way too many edits to look through. Can anyone tell me how to do this? Robert Happelberg 22:19, 9 August 2006 (UTC)

date of birth
The date of birth in this article is: february 27 while in the wikipedia 'list of dates' Sharon's birth is mentioned under february 26. Anyone who can confirm one of both, please update and delete this discussion-item
 * the hebrew wikipedia says the 26th. Jon513 15:47, 10 August 2007 (UTC)

Coincidence?
'' "Moshe Dayan was born in a kibbutz ("collective farm"), Degania Alef ("Degania A"), Palestine, near the Kinneret (Sea of Galilee). His parents were Shmuel and Devorah who were Jewish immigrants from Russia, and he was the first child born in the newly established community. At age 14, he joined the Haganah, the underground Jewish militant group which was at a very early stage in its history. He was greatly influenced by the military teachings of the English pro-Zionist officer Orde Wingate when Dayan was a sergeant prior to World War II." ''

So Sharon and Dayan have the same named parents, both come from Russia and both joined Haganah at 14? I do not know anything about this and just wanted it to bring it to the attention of someone who might --Frup 08:54, 14 September 2006 (UTC)

External link
On October 14, 88.153.34.93 added an external link to a site completely devoted to Sharon : http://www.ariel-sharon-life-story.com/. The site contains a lot of information, but it is impossible to know who wrote it and it contains no e-mail adress to join the webmaster. If someone finds out who the author is or where the text come from, please let me know. --Scroteau96 01:07, 17 October 2006 (UTC)

Name change to Sharon
It's been brought up twice before in this talk page, but I thought third time's the charm. Would someone knowledgeable about the subject please add to the article a brief (sourced) explanation of when and why he changed his name to Sharon, and the meaning of the name? Thanks. Robert K S 16:34, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
 * It was common practice in the early 50s for all gov't officials and sr. army officers to change their names which had meaning in European languages to Israeli/Hebrew names that either sounded like their previous name, or had the same meaning, as part of the process of "nation building". Sharon is named for the coastal plain north of Tel Aviv. Former user 2 16:47, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
 * That answers the why, now if we can get the when and the sourcing... Robert K S 19:14, 10 December 2006 (UTC)
 * I don't think this is particularly noteworthy. Of all the articles about Israeli political figures who changed their name, I doubt there are more than a few that mention the timing.  I don't see any reason to single out Ariel Sharon, and I also don't see any value in delving into the details of everybody's name change.  6SJ7 04:10, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

Death or continued incapacitation?
The infobox says he died "October 15, 2006", yet then at "Incapacitation" it says "On November 6, 2006, it was reported that Sharon has been moved out of an intensive care unit after treatment for a heart infection." This implies he is not dead. If he is still in a coma, then it should not say he died "October 15, 2006". Have I missed something? Jpeob 02:03, 17 December 2006 (UTC)
 * Thanks for pointing that out; others had reverted some vandalism but didn't go back far enough, and missed that (and another piece of vandalism as well.) The fictitious "death date" for Sharon was just added a few hours ago.  I just reverted back to the last vandalism-free version.  6SJ7 03:57, 17 December 2006 (UTC)

Bold text==Misquotes==

I believe the amount of misquotes attributed to Sharon deserves a mention in the article, or at least Wikiquote. 

HELLO

Where does it say that how Ariel Sharon had order to build a illegal wall ON the Palestine occupied territory??? This article MUST be created by a Jew, full of personal and religious biases, homie be careful of concealing the truth, Ou shall stand in front of GOD one day.

-          -        -   -- It seems like the guy above is an arab muslim, right? Now let us not get into any criticism, and please do not throw in islam or any other religion into it. People think differently and their opinions will always be influenced by circumstances such as nationality or culture. It is almost impossible to formulate neutral, facts-based conclusions. If you feel like this article is biased, just write down your own one. It's called freedom of speech. It's nothing personal, buddy, just take it easy.he is a reaqlly mother fucker if hes not die so this is all from my Allah side....sharon is a ugly pig gandu

Section: Prime Minister
This section needs major work. It seems like a blurb about him going to al-Aqsa in 2000 (before he was PM), something about French antisemitism and other trivia bunched together with a picture. It doesnt talk about his accomplishment during his prime ministership or anything very relevant. I believe a rewrite is in order. Jeztah 02:14, 4 May 2007 (UTC)

Comments
The statement that Sharon was the first Israeli OP.M. who was not of Likud or Labour in incorrect.

1948-53 David Ben-Gurion  Mapai 1953-55 M. Sharett  Mapai 1955-63 David Ben-Gurion  Mapai 1963-69 Levi Eshkol  Mapai/Labor

David S Sinclair, Montreal, 28 Jan 2007
 * Mapai eventually became the Labour party. nadav (talk) 05:51, 14 June 2007 (UTC)

No delete option? Wiki- has just met its match. Fakirs.

'Eventually' cuts no ice with serious researchers. It was not Labour during 1948-1963. If Wikipedia cannot deal with this, that's a problem for Wikipedia, not for historical facts.

References need fixing
The references in this article need fixing as the references section at the bottom of the page shows two references numbered 14. Consequentially all subsequent references are displaying the incorrect number in the reference section. e.g. the 15th reference in the page (which is correctly numbered 15 in the text) shows in the references section as the second 14. This is having a knock on effect with all subsequent references with these references all showing up as one number less than they should be. e.g. if you click on the up arrow next to the reference labeled 24 in the references section it takes you to a reference in the text labeled 23. Sorry for the verbose description. I don't know how to fix this problem so I will have to leave to someone else to do. Morgan Leigh 04:41, 18 June 2007 (UTC)


 * Just go ahead... nobody is stopping you! ;) --Maxl 18:49, 25 June 2007 (UTC)

Picture of Sharon in the Six-Day War?
Does anyone else think it would be appropriate to have a picture of Sharon during the Six-Day War. I think it would contribute greatly to the article. --The monkeyhate 20:47, 15 July 2007 (UTC)

Good Article Review
I don't believe this article meets the GA criteria, so I've raised the matter here. Giggy Talk 04:43, 2 August 2007 (UTC)

Delisted, for reasons mentioned at http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Good_article_review/Archive_26#Ariel_Sharon. Nja247 (talk • contribs) 20:56, 17 August 2007 (UTC)