Talk:Arintheus/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Will start soon. Iazyges  Consermonor   Opus meum  02:49, 24 August 2018 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
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 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
 * 2
 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
 * 3
 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
 * 4
 * 4.a   ✅
 * 5
 * 5.a   ✅
 * 6
 * 6.a   ✅
 * 6.b   ✅
 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.
 * Flavius Arinthaeus (died AD 378) was a Roman soldier suggest:
 * Flavius Arinthaeus (died AD 378) was a Roman officer
 * Done.


 * He was one of the clique of senior officers who elected Jovian to the throne, and may have played a similar role in the election of Valentinian. suggest:
 * He was part of a faction of senior officers who elected Jovian to the throne, and may have played a similar role in the election of Valentinian.
 * Not done. It wasn't a faction. Happy to change "clique", but I can't think of an alternate, accurate word or phrase.


 * He died in 378 while occupying one of the two most senior military positions of the Eastern Roman Empire. suggest:
 * He died in 378 while serving as Magister peditum, one of the two most senior military positions of the Eastern Roman Empire.
 * where Arinthaeus was instrumental in securing a victory against the enemy in difficult circumstances are said difficulties known, or do sources merely state that it was difficult?
 * Just that they were difficult. Unfortunately.


 * He was wounded in a minor skirmish and died suggest:
 * Julian was wounded in a minor skirmish and died
 * Done.


 * Valens accused Traianus of cowardice, but thanks to the support of the Magistri Militum Arinthaeus and Magister Equitum Victor suggest:
 * Valens accused Traianus of cowardice, but thanks to the support of Arinthaeus and the Magister Equitum Victor
 * Done.


 * That is all my suggestions, passing now. -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:35, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
 * As a side note, would you consider reviewing my FAC, Tetricus I, if you have time? Thanks! -- Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  15:36, 29 August 2018 (UTC)


 * You have a good eye for my poor phraseology. Thank you. Tetricus, of course. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:17, 29 August 2018 (UTC)