Talk:Arizona State Route 92/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Starstriker7 (talk · contribs) 17:59, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

i'll do this review. --Starstriker7(Talk) 17:59, 4 December 2011 (UTC)

Criterion 1

 * In previous versions of the article, the county in which the SR is located was present in the lead. Is there any worth in re-adding it?
 * "which contains the Huachuca Mountains" - "Contains" sounds awkward. Can this be re-worded?
 * Wikilink "Palominas".
 * "Arizona Department of Transportation (ADOT), who is responsible for" - Substitute "who" for "which".
 * "originating at SR 82 in Whetstone, heading south into Sierra Vista" - Replace the comma with "and" or "before".
 * "turned south following its current route to Bisbee. - There is an extra space between The period and the refs.

Criterion 2

 * There is a cite needed tag in the History section.

Criterion 3
The article seems sufficiently broad and focused, with relation to to peer GAs.

Criterion 4
The article is written without undue weight or neutrality issues.

Criterion 5
Edit history is all quiet.

Criterion 6
Images check out. No captions are needed.

Overall comments
Good work on this; I will pass it after the few nitpicks are resolved. Also, I believe I reviewed an article on the Jinke Road Metro Station, which you submitted at GAN a while back; if you'd like to fix the comments raised and resubmit the article, I think it might pass as well. --Starstriker7(Talk) 05:41, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
 * I think I addressed all the issues mentioned. Are there any more? &mdash;  P C  B  05:52, 7 December 2011 (UTC)
 * Nope, you are all set. Passing it now. --Starstriker7(Talk) 07:26, 7 December 2011 (UTC)