Talk:Arkia/GA1

GA Reassessment
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I will be doing the GA Reassessment on this article as part of the GA Sweeps project. H1nkles (talk) 21:15, 3 June 2009 (UTC)

The primary problem with this article is the structure. Per WP:LEAD the lead is to be a summary of the article, the lead in this article is the body of the text. The main information should be listed after the lead with the lead just summarizing the information.

A secondary problem are the references, Refs [2], [3], and [9] are dead links. This is 1/3 of the references. Also I've added a template to the end of the section on Destinations since this is unreferenced.

To fix the article will require a complete reorganization of the article along with a rewrite of the lead to better summarize the article. The information will need to be broken down into sections so that the article is better formatted and complies with MOS. Citation will need to be found for the Destinations section and references will need to be fixed. Due to the amount of work to be done I will delist the article from GA currently and recommend that work be done and then the article nominated at WP:GAC. If you have questions please contact me at my talk page. H1nkles (talk) 21:31, 3 June 2009 (UTC)