Talk:Arlen Specter/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: DCI2026 (talk · contribs) 17:42, 17 March 2013 (UTC)


 * I will begin this review as soon as I finish reviewing Nagore Dargah.  dci  &#124;  TALK   17:42, 17 March 2013 (UTC)

Content review

 * The lead is good. It's of appropriate length and reads well.   dci  &#124;  TALK   00:01, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
 * Early life –
 * I wouldn't mind seeing a few more sources in the second paragraph; for example, after the part about his father's WWI injury.
 * Would it not be best to have a separate "Personal life" section? I understand it would be short, but I'm not sure the information in the last paragraph pertains to his early life.
 * Early political career –

Remaining GA criteria

 * No problems with article focus.  dci  &#124;  TALK   00:01, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
 * No issues with image copyrights; all's well on that front.  dci  &#124;  TALK   00:01, 30 March 2013 (UTC)
 * No problems with neutrality or stability.  dci  &#124;  TALK   00:01, 30 March 2013 (UTC)

Update
I understand it's been a while, but I'm not seeing any real obstacles to passing the article. There's nothing of note to comment on in the remaining parts of the article; prose is clear and abides by MOS throughout, and comments made under "Remaining GA critera" remain true throughout. I will pass the article. —Theodore! (talk) (contribs) 19:24, 21 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Danke schὂn! Go   Phightins  !  21:31, 21 April 2013 (UTC)