Talk:Armageddon (2006)

Pre-GA review

 * Background
 * Wikilink disqulaification.
 * "Theodore Long told Kennedy that he had found a SmackDown! superstar that had never faced Kennedy" sounds a little awkward to me. Could you possibly reword it?
 * You end up using both "Kennedy" and "Mr. Kennedy". Be consistent and pick one.
 * "threatened to him over with a hearse that appeared again" - do you mean "threatened to run him over"?
 * "Undertaker appeared in front of the car of which Kennedy was sitting in the drivers seat" - again, awkwardly worded. Consider rewording.


 * Event
 * "including the use of various moves" is too vague. Add a move or two that was performed.
 * Shouldn't "Paul London and Brian Kendrick, Blue Bloods" read "Paul London and Brian Kendrick, the Blue Bloods", grammatically speaking?
 * "Kendrick managed to get the pair off" sounds strange. Perhaps, "Kendrick managed to knock the pair off"
 * Change "between The Boogeyman versus The Miz." Don't use "between" and "versus" in the same phrase. It doesn't sound right. Either, "between The Boogeyman and The Miz." or "The Boogeyman versus The Miz."
 * "which causes for the wrestler applying the pin," is very awkwardly worded.
 * "brake" should be spelt "break".
 * "Helms controlled the most of it" should be "Helms controlled most of it"
 * Wikilink "swinging neckbreaker"
 * "The following was a" - should "match" not be inserted into the sentence?
 * Wikilink chokeslam and tombstone.
 * There shouldn't be an "e" on the end of "Santa Clause"
 * "which was portrayed" should read "who was portrayed"
 * Wikilink STFU
 * "kicked himself in his hear" - huh?
 * "Batista then hit the Batista Bomb onto Booker" - should be performed instead of hit.


 * Aftermath
 * "earned" should be "earn"
 * Wikilink disqualification


 * Results
 * Wikilink Singles match - Professional wrestling match types


 * References
 * Refs 2, 3, 4 need the publisher (WWE) wikilinked
 * Is 24wrestling a reliable source?
 * I believe it is. -- iMa tth ew  T.C. 10:42, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

-- ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 06:27, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Thanks Nici! I finished the review, all is completed. -- iMa tth ew  T.C. 11:08, 14 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Looks good, although you only had to wikilink one instance of "Singles match" in the results section... ♥ Nici ♥ Vampire ♥ Heart ♥ 11:25, 14 July 2008 (UTC)

Not sure, but...
I'm not sure, but shouldn't there be a mention of a clearly visible mat being used in the Last Ride Match (When Undertaker was thrown from the set_ —Preceding unsigned comment added by Tory88 (talk • contribs) 17:47, 18 December 2009 (UTC)
 * Even if sourced, I don't think it would be notable.  TJ   Spyke   18:02, 18 December 2009 (UTC)