Talk:Armando Galarraga's near-perfect game/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 16:54, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

I will be starting a review of this article immediately. T C  N7 JM  16:54, 29 June 2013 (UTC)

I have just two comments. I have also made a couple of minor fixes myself, most involving punctuation. Otherwise, this is a really great effort overall. I'll put this on hold. T C  N7 JM  17:29, 29 June 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) If I remember correctly, it's actually recommended on Wikipedia to put the punctuation outside of parentheses of it's wasn't originally there. Specifically, I'm referring to the nicknames for the game in parentheses in the lead.
 * 2) The first sentence in the second paragraph doesn't really flow contextually with the rest of the paragraph, and it's kinda random. What I mean is that you have that one sentence about instant replay being speculated, then the rest is about reactions from inside MLB to the call and the sportsmanship of those involved. Perhaps you could put this in a better spot?

Thanks for the review! Both issues addressed. I just took the instant replay sentence out since it's just a minor point, so it didn't really need the lead mention. Wizardman 02:34, 30 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Alright, looks great. Passing. T  C  N7 JM  08:46, 30 June 2013 (UTC)