Talk:Armed Forces Special Weapons Project/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 05:18, 26 October 2011 (UTC)

I'll get to this in the next couple of days.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:18, 26 October 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria


 * 1) Is it reasonably well written?
 * A. Prose quality:
 * B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
 * Lede is too short.
 * 1) Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
 * A. References to sources:
 * B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
 * C. No original research:
 * 1) Is it broad in its coverage?
 * A. Major aspects:
 * B. Focused:
 * Nimitz was an Admiral of the Fleet in US terminology. ISBN for Hansen 1995a is invalid, although the OCLC # is good. The link to United States (1978) is to the title and distribution pages (only) of the doc.
 * 1) Is it neutral?
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) Is it stable?
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * No edit wars, etc:
 * 1) Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
 * A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
 * B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass or Fail:
 * Pass or Fail:

Comments
 * 1) Nimitz was a fleet admiral. Linked to US fleet admiral article.
 * I sit corrected.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 21:57, 7 November 2011 (UTC)


 * 1) Corrected Hansen bibliographic entry
 * 2) Substituted a new link to the History of the Custody and Deployment of Nuclear Weapons (U): July 1945 through September 1977
 * 3) Expanded the introduction.
 * All problems should be addressed now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 20:47, 4 November 2011 (UTC)