Talk:Armored Trooper Votoms: Pailsen Files

Proposed Cleanup

 * Of note with the tagging: Part of the lead section is very vague: "The series is also notable for its use of 3D computer graphics." Why is it notable? What makes this an important aspect of this series notability? If this stays in the lead article it should be expanded on, cited, and described. Also of note that is in need of change is that almost all of this seems to be plot summary. There are a few pieces that are not about plot that have to do with the series, but it would be beneficial to add some external items into the article such as critical reception, notability, etc. Robotunicr0n (talk) 16:09, 25 July 2012 (UTC)


 * To bring this article to completion, a couple things need to be addressed: (mark completed and add to this list if you so desire) Robotunicr0n (talk) 16:12, 25 July 2012 (UTC)
 * -Copy editing needs to be completed
 * -References should be found and cited regarding the information presented in this article, if possible.
 * -Plot summary should be toned down. Particularly the episode overview is a little bit expansive, in my opinion. Checking other verified Wikipedia pages regarding TV series with plot summaries for episodes should help give a good idea.
 * -Lead section should be revised to fully exposition all of the presented information (as mentioned above, especially the "notable use of 3D graphics")