Talk:Arnold Rönnebeck

rating and review
Not ready for prime time. Needs more citations, or more appropriate citations, less gossip. Unclear prose. After the tragic death of his American fiance, he went to America -- ??? does not compute. Vary sentence structure-- most sentences begin with his name. Omit extraneous info about his friends and their possible lovers, or link it to the text in some way that is less trivial. The statuary on Iliff Avenue and at Gilpin street is in public view. Pictures would be good. --Auntieruth55 (talk) 01:15, 30 May 2009 (UTC)