Talk:Aron Simis

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 * Aron Simis was born in Recife, Brazil in 1942. He is presently full professor at the Universidade Federal de Pernambuco, Brazil, and Class A research scholarship recipient from the Brazilian Research Council. He earned his PhD from Queen's University, Canada.
 * Aron Simis was born in Recife, Brazil in 1942. He is presently full professor at the Universidade Federal de Pernambuco, Brazil, and Class A research scholarship recipient from the Brazilian Research Council. He earned his PhD from Queen's University, Canada.

So is he a researcher in medical technology, a seismologist, a chemist, a sociologist, a psychologist, or what? The reader still doesn't know at this point! That information is part of the claim to notability and needs to be given at the beginning.
 * He has previously held a full professorship at IMPA (Instituto de Matemática Pura e Aplicada) in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.
 * He has previously held a full professorship at IMPA (Instituto de Matemática Pura e Aplicada) in Rio de Janeiro, Brazil.

OK, FINALLY it's starting to become clear, but still it's not explicit.
 * He was president of the Brazilian Mathematical Society
 * He was president of the Brazilian Mathematical Society

clearer still, but not yet explicit.
 * After a large number of additional words, it finally says:
 * His main research interests in mathematics include: main structures in commutative algebra; projective varieties in algebraic geometry; aspects of algebraic combinatorics; special graded algebras; founda
 * His main research interests in mathematics include: main structures in commutative algebra; projective varieties in algebraic geometry; aspects of algebraic combinatorics; special graded algebras; founda
 * His main research interests in mathematics include: main structures in commutative algebra; projective varieties in algebraic geometry; aspects of algebraic combinatorics; special graded algebras; founda

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