Talk:Arrest of Karen Garner

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Celestina007 (talk) 05:43, 28 April 2021 (UTC)

Timeline and details
- - you removed a department statement because you don't see what the department statement it tells us. Here's my explanation. It offers an explanation on why no action was taken against the officers from July 2020 to March 2021. Apparently the Department was unaware of alleged wrongdoing. You also removed the dates of events - - again, because you think they are insignificant. However, they establish the timeline of departmental action. Three officers were placed on administrative leave, and three officers resigned, only after the laughing video was published.  starship .paint  (exalt) 07:05, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * All the statement says is that they hadn't received a complaint. That doesn't explain why no action was taken, since clearly a number of people in the department knew what had happened, complaint or no complaint. As for the dates, the reader is told that the lawsuit, video releases, and placings-on-leave were i sequence, and the dates given show it's a compressed timeline, so I don't see how the specific dates and intervals tell the reader much of anything. EEng 07:13, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * - the dates matter because they clarify the sequence. In the version of the article since your last edit, we have actually gotten the sequence wrong (some of which is my fault as well). On April 19 the DA requested Fort Collins Police Services / United States Attorney for the District of Colorado / Federal Bureau of Investigation investigate. On April 26 the police station surveillance video footage of the laughing officers was uploaded. In the text, the order is reversed. It's not automatically apparent to me that the dates are all automatically chronological. It would be better to err on the side of clarity.  starship .paint  (exalt) 07:25, 16 May 2021 (UTC)
 * I've fixed the sequence.  starship .paint  (exalt) 08:07, 16 May 2021 (UTC)

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