Talk:Arrested Development/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Saw1998 (talk · contribs) 07:54, 6 October 2012 (UTC)

Hi there! Great article. I have no problem saying its a definite pass, really, but three minor things itched at me:


 * You should offer a list of the characters alongside the descriptions of them. I think people should be able to grab the names and cast members a little more at a glance.


 * Under recurring characters, where's Julia Louis-Dreyfus as the "blind" compulsive liar?


 * Under the season plot summaries, I think you should include more about the banana shack & it burning down.


 * However, I also thought that the descriptions of the characters were very in-depth, and quite a bit more advanced an some I have seen in the past.


 * Also, the information about the cast was very great, and I liked the part about Will Arnett.


 * There was absolutely no noticeable bias in the article.


 * There was a lot of detail about the upcoming season-- good!


 * The pictures you offered were really good, especially the title card you chose.


 * Lastly, the theme for the info box was appropriate-- the red was very well matched, which gives the article a more organized look.


 * Oh, and references-- you had 92, which is a perfect number, and no IMDb I need to sleep you for.

Overall, it was really well-written, and it didn't bore me to death to read. GOOD ARTICLE! ---Saw1998 (talk) 07:54, 6 October 2012 (UTC)
 * Hey, Saw1998. Firstly, thanks so much for the review and pass.  I've added Julia Louis-Dreyfus to the Recurring characters section, per your suggestion.  Regarding your suggestion about a list of characters, this article has been obeying WP:PROSE.  While it may be more visually appealing to include a list, in Wikipedia it is generally more acceptable for prose.  And the Banana stand should be added in the future.  Thanks again!  --  Wikipedical (talk) 21:13, 6 October 2012 (UTC)