Talk:Art's Auto/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 02:22, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 02:22, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:
 * "stands on a triangular lot and intersected by Main Street and Lonsdale Avenue," rm and
 * "This attempt to revitalize and preserve historic sites was not unique, more than 4000 such organizations existed by 1977 to re-use or save the site from destruction" The way it's written makes it sound like 4,000 organizations sprang up to help Art's Auto, rather than historical preservation in general; reword.
 * "has continued to retain its the historic features" rm the

Article on hold, will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 03:07, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * - Thanks and good catch with the "site" instead of "sites", but I also rectified it by clarifying this as a local attempt amidst the 4,000+ organizations nationwide. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 17:26, 16 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Article reads better there now, so it now passes GA status. Wizardman  03:10, 18 February 2015 (UTC)