Talk:ArtRave: The Artpop Ball/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 15:57, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Quite a few dead links
 * similar named → similarly named
 * ✅ Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:59, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Costumes along with choreography had to find a way to make a single, coherent show. → This sounds awkward
 * Reworded Snuggums (talk / edits) 20:59, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Gaga repeatedly placed within the top-ten of the Billboard Boxscore lists for the tour grosses. → Is this as it happened throughout the year?
 * Yes Snuggums (talk / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 21:15, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Billboard also listed it as the ninth best concert tour of the year with 76 reported shows. The tour also receive → Also... also
 * Adjusted <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 20:59, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * Later she took → Comma after Later
 * Added <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 21:01, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * were seven dresses → Dresses or outfits?
 * I went with "outfits" <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 21:04, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * completely sold out → You don't need to write completely, because sold out already indicates that no tickets were left
 * Removed <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 21:21, 27 August 2015 (UTC)


 * In June 2014 Billboard → Comma after 2014
 * Fixed <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 21:10, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

On hold for 7 days. — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b> 16:56, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Outcome
 * Thank you for the review, . Take a look now. <b style="color:#454545">Snuggums</b> (<b style="color:#454545">talk</b> / <b style="color:#454545">edits</b>) 21:21, 27 August 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing. — <b style="color:#595454">Calvin999</b>  21:22, 27 August 2015 (UTC)

Congrats! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 21:46, 27 August 2015 (UTC)