Talk:Arthur Honeyman

Needs improvement
 from here:
 * [...] Footnote 7 is a bare reference; footnote 3 lacks an access date; the EL section should be removed as if an EL is used as a source it does not go into an EL section; the LEDE section should be expanded; then overall it needs expansion, for instance his date of birth and date of death are missing as are the years as to the moves; lastly the career section jumps around instead of chronological order which gets confusing. [...] Aboutmovies (talk) 18:16, 6 December 2016 (UTC)

 --Martina Nolte talk 07:15, 7 December 2016 (UTC)

PS: --Martina Nolte talk 07:32, 7 December 2016 (UTC) update 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC) --Martina Nolte talk 04:23, 8 December 2016 (UTC) update 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)
 * WP:LEDE
 * years of the "moves": 1981 and 2007. ✅
 * date of birth; May 10, 1940 ✅
 * date of death; December 08, 2008 ✅


 * footnote 7 ✅
 * footnote 3 access date ✅
 * EL section removed ✅
 * career section chronological order ✅

--Martina Nolte talk 02:28, 12 December 2016 (UTC)